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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oooh! Im in! Just let me know when!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!!!
Yeah, the stakes I think should be evened out in the next chapter, so hopefully that will work.
And yeah, I love Rina’s magic! (fun fact I gave her that power because I already knew she would be kind of a medic on the battlefield, and I didn’t know a whole lot about medicine… So this way she won’t need to use it much…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yes! I read Auggie and me and loved it soooo much! It went perfectly with Wonder and I thought it was so cool that it showed you kinda “behind the scenes” of the book!
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Starshiness replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Hmm well now you’ve got me thinkin… I wonder if one reason parents are left out of storylines so much is because the idea of instruction coming from someone older and wiser–really, the concept of authority–is something that’s trying to be excluded. People may not know that this is what they’re doing but, like @whalekeeper said initially, it…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper Ooo bravo, that is a great observation!! It truly is sad that many books today will normalize leaving parents out of the picture or only include the ones that are abusive/the cause of charries’ trauma 🤦🏽♀️. Love the conversation here tho and reading all of y’alls perspectives on the issue!!
I hate to say it, but my two main WIPs…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Yea true. Oo I like the shapeshifter idea. But idk how that sounds or how it would tie in with the story.. unless someone else wants to lend the creative juices bc I’m fresh out XD
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Esther replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @freedomwriter76
That’s a really good point!!
It’s actually one thing that I was really excited to write about in my trilogy. The fact that Ami’s parents love her, support her, and are her role models.
She has a great relationship with her mother, and she looks to her father as so…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Great topic idea, btw!!! 😃
Okay, yes, so I’ve definitely noticed this in a lot of books. I do have this one book where there are a lot of parents like that, but it’s ’cause they’re all stuck up royals…. and it’s the kids too, so yeah. 😅
Anyway, yes! We definitely need more good parents!
While he doesn’t come into the story until…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12
Derek
Derek watched as Ridley ran down the hall. He had a fleeting thought to chase after him, but he decided it was best to let him be.
Derek ran a hand through his hair and looked down at his dark combat boots. That kid… something was, not wrong, but different about him… and that som…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ami
Ami had a small smile on her lips as she walked back to her dorm room. She was glad everything with Ev was straightened out. Maybe he wouldn’t care as much when Clint asked her to the dance.
Her thoughts came to a screeching halt.
When Clint asked her to the dance…
It was more like, if Clint asked her to…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yep, what they (@kyronthearcanin and @euodia-vision) said! XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
We have one big group and then Erich and Erebus are split off, at least right now.
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Allison replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Heres a quick overview of it (borrowed from another place 🙂 )
Auggie or August introduces himself to the reader. He’s ten years old, and though he feels normal, he wishes he had a “normal” face. He declines to describe what his face looks like, insisting that it’s probably worse than whatever the reader is imagining. August has…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Ami
“Just…things I’ve picked up on…that’s all.” Ara said, giving Ami a smile. “But don’t worry, Ami. Whatever’s going on, I’m sure it will work out.”
Ami smiled back. “Thanks.” She sat up and dragged her fingers through her blond hair, getting out any tangles.
It looked as if Ara did speak from experience, thoug…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Actually, you wanna RP as Tony instead of me RPing as Ev? And is Eva in the dorm room? Cuz Ami just got in there.
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Esther replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Sounds cool!! I’ll have to add it to my tbr list! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Awesome!! Glad I could help! 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, Dune is like a cat XD The whole races thing is kind of confusing, so I get it lol
Thanks! 🙂
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Allison posted an update 3 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c
Hi! I remember seeing an email for a post you did about having the most users online and cant find it, are you still going to do it? If so just let me know! I would love to join! I am pretty flexible, just no screens after like 9 eastern time 🙂 -
Allison replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@euodia-vision @esther-c @karissa-chmil @felicity @sarahsmile @janellebelovedpig @elanor @
Another great book to read! I don’t remember if I posted it before, but has anyone here read Wonder by R.J Palacio ?(Not sure if I spelled her last name right ) Did anyone like it? Did anyone cry (I might have just a little 🙂 ) Let me know! Also please t…[Read more]
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Yep, I’ll try to do it eventually. I’ll probably do it sometime when school’s over, because there’s a lot of studying I should be doing. 🙂 (And if you want to find the forum, it’s called “Break the Record!!!” [not sure about the number of exclamation marks 😂]).