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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooooh I love this!!! 😃😃
I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise I would love to read more, even as just a larger short story.
Unfortunately, I cannot think of any critiques to give right now, other than Will wasn’t capitalized once. 😅 I really love the story! It feels so real.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! Quelin was the first one I ever actually drew. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) changed their profile picture 3 years, 5 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks so much! I was hoping the healing was at least somewhat realistic, but all I know comes from watching random vet shows… I’m glad you could picture everything well! That’s something I’ve been working on a lot recently, so it helps to know someone can. 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh, don’t worry about it! I honestly wasn’t sure if I was forgetting something. You’re totally fine.
And happy Easter!!! 😃🎉🎉🎉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
No problem!
Yeah, her powers are very limited so far. The idea is that this general time is when all their powers are beginning to really develop. So yeah, that’s just the small part, and shifting reality is the end result, though it takes tons of energy for her to do so. I’ve never read the Reckoners series, but I’ve been…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! Brycen hit Tali when everything went black and he swung out his fist. So, he didn’t mean to, but it just kind of happened.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
WHOA, you’re in the middle of all my favorites!
Lol, that’s awesome!
God of the Garden is fantastic. Do you have a favorite Green Ember character??
I’ve only read through like chapter 2, and I’m enjoying it so far! 😀
Hm… idk. Maybe Heather? I’m not entirely sure. XD
Also, please tag me to rant about Ranger’s Apprentice. It’s phenomen…
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! 🥰 Sure did! Watched it yesterday at the Theater…first time (and only my second time, lol!) I’ve been in a theater since How To Train Your Dragon 2 came out 😂
The movie was just sooooooo good tho…it’s probably one of my favorite animated movies 😉
We loved it! We weren’t big fans of the plot. (I think I missed the inciting…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Hey!! I’m still on, but only for a few more minutes. 🙂
Doing pretty good! Wbu?
Oooh, cool! XD
I’m almost in high school. I’ll be a freshman for the 2023-24 school year. 😉
I’m in the middle of rereading the Wingfeather Saga! Rn I’m in the middle of book two. I’m also reading God of the Garden by Andrew Peterson. F…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh, and to put the thing at the bottom of your post, the place on your profile should be labeled as signature when you go to edit it… I think. XD
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Also, random question: how do y’all get those signatures on your post? You know, the part under the line? I can’t figure out how to add one…Â
hi, I’m a dunce at technology 😉So, you should find it when you go to edit your profile. There should be a box where you can put it. 🙂
Naw, you’re good. 😁My writing’s been good! To be honest, I ha…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooh, fun!!
Ikr? XD
Pretty good! I’ve had writer’s block for a little bit (in all honesty, it was probably procrastination… 😛) but I got a little bit of writing done today, so I’m glad about that. 🙂
What about you? How’s writing been?
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Aw man, sorry that you’re not feeling well. Hope you feel better soon! 😀 At least you have time to do some writerly things. 😉
I’m doing pretty well. 😊 I’m excited for Easter tomorrow!! We’re hosting Easter dinner at our house this year, so that will be fun. What are you doing for Easter?
Also, I love you new profile pic! I’m gonna cha…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @awsumfaith @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @keilah-h @landric @joy-calle @euodia-vision @felicity
Heyo! 👋
Anybody on and wanna chat??
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooh, I love that!!! 😃Your writing is really good.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
You’re welcome, and thanks! Good luck with those classes. 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
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