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Esther replied to the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Great question!!
But the answer solely depends on you and what you want for your story. I feel like the name Shauna Sarah Smith would stick in my mind if I read your story. It’s easy to remember, and it may be something that defines your character. If you decide to keep it, make sure you don’t use alliteration for any other cha…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Thanks for doing that 🙂 Now it looks a lot better!
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Allison started the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I was researching for writing tips and saw that people say you should not use Alliterations? My main charcters name is ” Shauna Sarah Smith”, I really like the sound of her name, but should I change it? Why shouldent we use alliterations? Thanks!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper
Fynn
Fynn rubbed the back of his neck. “Ok, ok. I’m sorry.” He looked away and rolled his eyes, making sure the fiery little kid didn’t see.
Both Lukas and the boy glared at him, not satisfied with the apology. Fynn sighed. He crouched down near the white haired boy who was clinging to Lukas,…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 4 months ago
@acancello Yay I’m glad you liked them!! Oo well if you ever get those ideas written down, be sure to show us the results! 🙂
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Starshiness replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@y’all Oop I saw a piece missing and some grammatical errors and they were bugging me so I just fixed them and did a teeny bit of editing. I didn’t change anyone’s wording tho, so hopefully that’s ok with everyone lol
One bright sunny day, I watched a girl leap over a rotten log and land with a splash in a muddy puddle. She was beautiful,…
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @godlyfantasy12 @starshiness @mineralizedwritings
Oooooh! This story is getting really good! I dont know how to add on though…. Does anyone else? Here it is so far!
One bright sunny day, I watched a girl leap over a rotten log and land with a splash in a muddy puddle. She was beautiful,daring and braver tha…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 4 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @starshiness @elanor @felicity
Wow! I have read all your poems and I love them so much! I am sorry I haven’t been on so long, but now i can be on more often! I haven’t written any poetry lately, but I have had a few ideas!
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Allison posted an update 3 years, 4 months ago
@esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @freedomwriter76 @janellebelovedpig @booksbyjayna @landric @lightoverdarkness6 @sarahsmile
Hi everyone! Im officially back on Kingdom Pen! We now have internet and I can be on here more often! I missed you all and cant wait to see what you all have written! Our family move went amazing and im so thankful to be…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Aesthetics, anyone? ✨ in the forum Art 3 years, 4 months ago
Yaaaayyy!!! I can’t wait!! 😊😄
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Aesthetics, anyone? ✨ in the forum Art 3 years, 4 months ago

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Esther replied to the topic Aesthetics, anyone? ✨ in the forum Art 3 years, 4 months ago

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Esther replied to the topic Aesthetics, anyone? ✨ in the forum Art 3 years, 4 months ago

(I have two face claims for Ev. You can use whichever you want. 🙂 )
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Esther replied to the topic Aesthetics, anyone? ✨ in the forum Art 3 years, 4 months ago
Ok… sooo… I do want you to make a moodboard for me. 👉🏻👈🏻 😁
But not for one charrie in particular…
You get to make an aesthetic for…
Everdala!!!
Pretty much a moodboard for Ev and Ami. 😊
Any Specific Pics I want you to use: none in particular, just their face claims
Color Aesthetics: whatever you end up doing. I don’t r…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Hehehe… 😏
Ami
“We can continue through the garden if you’d like,” Clint said with a smile.
Ami was about to answer, but it looked like Clint was looking at something behind her. She turned and saw Tony and Ev at the entrance to the gardens. Tony waved, smiling, but Ev didn’t even look their way. Ami frowned.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Oh my word…
Like, no kidding, that scene was so good!!! 😄
If that’s your first draft, I can’t wait to see the final draft!! 🤩
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
So, I can relate to the laziness/procrastination part 100%!!! 😂 What I do to overcome that, is just force myself to write something. Even if it’s just a sentence or two. At least I got some words written of my WIP. Some days I only write a paragraph or two, some days I write a whole chapter, some days I write half a chapter, and o…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I know what you mean! I know that I personally have dealt with this quite a bit, as well as a few other writer friends. We’re in a fallen world. Almost every writer does. And if they don’t… I must know their secret XD
Anyway, don’t feel like you’re any worse than anyone else, or than you used to be. Often it’s one of the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I’ll write the next RP tomorrow, btw. 🙂
Oh, you’re fine! 😊 We’re past that anyway, so it doesn’t matter. 😉
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That’s great! We’re so glad to have you back!! 🙂
Welcome back!! So glad the move went well for y’all! 😄
glad you’re back!