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@freedomwriter76

Actually, you wanna RP as Tony instead of me RPing as Ev? And is Eva in the dorm room? Cuz Ami just got in there.

@acancello

Sounds cool!! I’ll have to add it to my tbr list! 😀

@acancello

Awesome!! Glad I could help! 🙂

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Yeah, Dune is like a cat XD The whole races thing is kind of confusing, so I get it lol

Thanks! 🙂

@euodia-vision @esther-c @karissa-chmil @felicity @sarahsmile @janellebelovedpig @elanor  @

Another great book to read! I don’t remember if I posted it before, but has anyone here read Wonder by R.J Palacio ?(Not sure if I spelled her last name right ) Did anyone like it? Did anyone cry (I might have just a little 🙂  ) Let me know! Also please t…[Read more]

@esther-c

Yes, the parents did do a theme I was going to have there names also start with “S” but I think that would be to much, and I have not really created them yet, so its ok if I change there names 🙂

Thanks!

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

I’m going to RP for Ev and Ami this afternoon. 🙂

(I’m not sure what happened to Ev and Tony after they left Clint and Ami. XD)

@whalekeeper

Oh yeah, I gotcha. 😉

(I should probably take some time to do some good studying this week. Final exams are next week. 😬)

@acancello

Hmm…

Well, this is something that you’ve gotta be careful with. You could say that alliterative names is what their parents wanted, because I know some parents have a “theme”, if you will, for all their children’s names. (For example, me and my siblings all have Bible names [and so do my parents 😁])

So it all depends on what thei…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

First of all, great scene!! 😄

Second…

I love that idea about Corvina’s mother!! It would be really cool!!!

@starshiness @esther-c

OK thanks! I have 2 other characters who are her brothers and there names are “Samuel Smith and Scott Smith” I haven’t picked out there middle names yet. Do you think that would make it sound unrealistic?

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, I love that scene!!! It’s so good! I just love November XD

The Silvening thing is really cool, too! 🙂

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @landric @gwyndalf-the-wise

Alrighty, here’s Chapter 6! I’m not completely sure about this one… It feels right, and gets a lot of world/character building in I guess, but I’ve been told the stakes just aren’t completely there. So we’ll see XD

Chapter 6

Back on the ship, I introduce Arew to Sorren. He seems…[Read more]

@starshiness

Hmmmmmm…. good question. A princess prbly wouldn’t have anything to do with looks, but the elf thing could be because her ears were hidden… Or maybe she could be like a shapeshifter, like how certain people could change into wolves or something… I don’t know XD

@acancello Hmmm I would think that people say not to use it because perhaps if you have multiple characters with alliterated names, it would give the story a very fairytale-ish or imaginary world kind of feel and would be “unrealistic” if you know what I mean.

I agree with Esther tho, I think one name is fine and I like the sound of Sarah Shauna…[Read more]

The only thing I really didn’t do much with was the different tenses heh… the first half seemed to follow present tense but then we apparently switched to past after that? Oh well 😅

Continuing…

“Um, not intentionally… he sorta followed me here.” Piper shot Griffin a peeved look that indicated she hadn’t forgotten the offense.

 

The…

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@acancello Oh great, np!