Lady Iliara

@skredder @rochellaine I’m joining for a limited amount of time… 🙂

You know you’re a writer when you could easily win a game show where all the questions are morbid/obscure/weird.

How much would your spleen go for on the black market?

Me: *raises hand*

How do you escape a straight jacket?

Me: *raises hand*

Name a 19th century belief about mermaids.

Me: *raises hand*

If you were being attacked by…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99  Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!

@ariel-ashira  YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!

@daughteroftheking  Thank you kindly.  And yes, those are some good points.  *strokes chin*

@ingridrd The suspense! I’m so excited to read about this Jaclyn I’ve heard so much about. I really enjoyed it and would gladly keep reading. One thing, if you could add a little more about what she is feeling during the chapter, that’d be great. I can already get a good feel for the overall mood, which is excellent, (something I’m having trouble…[Read more]

@epicaddie2  Yep, I think I figured it out now!  Thanks muchly.  🙂

@catwing I don’t know… Could you have? *watches you intently*

All right, then. Thank you, Wiser!

@rochellaine yeah, my dad is tired of me changing the scenes. Me too. XP bye!

@ariel-ashira oooohh…

@rochellaine Slowly… Trying to show more. But I may end up changing this scene.
@ariel-ashira Welcome!

@rochellaine @epicaddie2 @aislinn-mollisong @ingridrd @alia
I’m here editing, earlier than usual. 🙂

@jess-penrose No, you haven’t told me about passive voice yet. 🙂

@seekjustice That’s good to know I’m not alone. 😀

@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.

@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.

@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!

@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]

@supermonkey42 Thank you! Indeed it is.
0.0 I didn’t realize that. Please do that.

@skredder *nods* A bucket, indeed. Thank you.

@jessi-Rae Since he’s an actual person on here and other people would want to use him, I couldn’t have him die for real. Could I? *grin*
*thinks* You should thank the Wiser.
Thank you!

@rochellaine That’s her. *grins*…[Read more]

@christi-Eaton There’s a manga series, Manga Classics that adapts classics into graphic novels. I’ve only read the Jungle Book and Les Miserables adaptions. They were pretty good.
Some of Ted Dekker’s books have been adapted into graphic novels.
There’s also comic collections like, Calvin and Hobbes, Peanuts, etc.
That’s all I can think of off the…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x Glad you like your final! 🙂
Now I just have to finish everyone else.
Though I did realize I made myself a bit to big. *shrug*

Oh, good. *sighs in relief* The Wiser isn’t dead. Thank you, @catwing! Or should I thank Kay? Or even the Wiser himself, for simply acting?

Anyway, this was great! As usual. 🙂

@jess-penrose Yeah, I have trouble showing, not telling. 🙁
Maybe after I go through all these and get the revised doc to you. I’m revising it in a different doc. 🙂
Just wondering, did you think I needed to develop the characters more?

@rochellaine @seekjustice I have to go to bed. Good night.