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    filewriter@base13x
    @filewriterbase13x
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      @catwing, straps are fine. They didn’t really work for me when I tried it, but I am sure you can do it much better. I would rather not have straps, but you’re the artist. Really, you do it how you think is best. Thanks for asking, though. That pose would be awesome, thank you. Um… *looks down at B-bot* he doesn’t really have an expression. I would describe him as cute, but, *clears throat* he’s hovering right here. 🙂

       

      Currently writing the Hostanica Files with the assistance of B-bot, my PAIA (Personal AI Assistant.)

      #69610
      Catwing
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        @warrenluther04 Just ignore the fact that he died. *grins*
        I seriously need to write the next part. *goes off and writes*


        @filewriterbase13x
        Okay, I may do no straps then.
        Does B-bot want a fiercer expression? 🙂

        IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

        #69612
        Catwing
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          @warrenluther04 here’s an update for you.

          @filewriterbase13x
          @dragon-snapper @sam-kowal @stan I fleshed out your characters more. Figuring out how everyone should look. Opinions?

           
          Snapper, do your wings have claws? Do they have the bones in the wing (like a bat does, for support.)? Should I draw scales on you? Any certain claw design you favor? I did I bit eastern dragon design. Delicate, but deadly. I think I copied your crest pattern correct…
          Yes, you are crushing a chair in your claw.

          Sam, how big are Stan wings in proportion to his body? Is this how big you imagine him? Does your hair need more fluff? You will get a body… Sometime soon.

          Filewriter, Should B-bot wave? This pose? ‘I don’t need a cape I have hair.’ 😛
          The eyes are coming…

          I really didn’t do much on it today… Well, progress.

          IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

          #69667
          MNValentine
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            @warrenluther04 Cool! I love it 😀 Can’t wait for more!!

            Silence! Silence everyone, for the king's speech!

            #69668
            Sam Kowal
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              @catwing I usually picture his wings a little bigger than that, about the size you drew his arms, and also his body a little bigger. And yes, my hair needs more fluff 😀 Cool artwork, though

              *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
              Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

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              filewriter@base13x
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                @catwing, WHAT! I HAVE STILL NOT REPLIED TO THIS!?! Sorry, I thing everything is fine as far as B-bot and my characters go. No, not fiercer. It’s perfect!

                He’s like. “Evil? searching definition… processing data… definition is-

                Dog! Dog is a friend. Silent processing… reaction to friendship…” and he waves. XD

                Sorry, was I not supposed to make a story out of his pose? Just Kidding. I think that it is probably too late to respond to this, but oh well. I just wanted to let you know that it looks great and wouldn’t change a thing if I could. Of course, you need to finish it, but besides that.

                “I don’t need a cape, I have hair.”

                I absolutely LOVE that. And probably something I would say. Maybe. Best pose for me. Character me of course.

                Currently writing the Hostanica Files with the assistance of B-bot, my PAIA (Personal AI Assistant.)

                #70469
                Catwing
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                  @sam-kowal (Also roughly how tall are you? Tall, short, the size of a breadbox? And do you want to be standing there or turning to get away?)

                  @filewriterbase13x
                  Good! (Drawing wise long hair or a cape are fun for composition. 😀 )
                  Finished Stan, File, B-bot, Catwing. (Unless I need to do something on Stan’s wings. Do I?) What do you think of yourselves?

                  Sorry this taking a long time, I want to be just write. 🙂 (Also I was busy.)

                  IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                  #70585
                  filewriter@base13x
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                    @catwing, Wow I love it!!! B-bot looks so cute, *cough* *notices b-bot staring at her* I mean, awesome. *b-bot looks almost smug* And my hair!!! Awesome work. It was well worth the wait!

                    Currently writing the Hostanica Files with the assistance of B-bot, my PAIA (Personal AI Assistant.)

                    #70597
                    Catwing
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                      @filewriterbase13x Glad you like your final! 🙂
                      Now I just have to finish everyone else.
                      Though I did realize I made myself a bit to big. *shrug*

                      IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                      #71417
                      Catwing
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                        @sam-kowal What do you think of Stan?
                        Do you want to be standing or turning away or do you have an idea?

                        IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                        #71421
                        Sam Kowal
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                          @catwing 😀 He’s great. I think turning away like I am is great, although if you’ve changed it then standing there would be good too

                          *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
                          Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

                          #71422
                          Ariel Ashira
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                            @warrenluther04 In case I have not told you before, this is awesome!

                            "In a mask, was he?"

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