Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so a few things.

It felt a little hand holdy at moments, like the beginning for example: “What if you didn’t know the answer to that secret, the one that was supposed to be yours? It made the situation incredibly difficult.” What is the point of mentioning that this made the situation incredibly difficult? You make a good e…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin AHHHH I LOVE THIS!!!!! SO MUCH!!!

Hello and welcome, @kyronthearcanin!!

(Somehow I missed it when @thearcaneaxiom tagged me. : )

Anywho…

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amateur writer!!

My WIP is ya dystopian, but I have tons of ideas for stories in other genres!

Fantasy sounds really awesome!! I tried fantasy a whi…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, that all makes sense, thanks for explaining!

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Interesting. Your characters are fun, and I like the plot you got going. How does Rina discover her power? Does she maybe heal a solider, or herself? Would you like any critiques?

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Also, what’s with the ranks? How does that work? I feel all shady as the Bumbling Henchman lol

It’s based off of the number of posts you’ve made total. I don’t know the different milestone numbers though XD

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While I am still getting the final touches figured out, it is a mainly verbal language. If you’re wondering which race, it’s the Felisaro (they’re probably the most innovative out of the five). The main idea was that they teach it to all the Felisaro they can at a young age, keeping it as secret as possible, and don’t use it unti…

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Secret as in, only that race is supposed to know about it, so they can speak in secret if they ever need to, but the secret is found out after a while.

Right, but is it an encrypted version of another language? Because if they’re speaking in private, then there’s no point in having it (unless you do have a reason) and if they…[Read more]

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First of all love the profile! And that character portrait looks really cool!! I also write fantasy and some sci-fi, sometimes blended. Like my brother said we’re working on a multiverse together, which has been super fun!

Mind if I ask what Healer is about?

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Oh, those are nice!

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I might join over the summer! I’ll have more time to write higher quality than, and because the writing is public, I wanna make sure it’s my best 🙂

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Ooh that riddle made my head hurt lol.

XD

Also, I’m playing around with a secret language for one of my races.

Cool! I’d love to hear about it! Secret in what way?

I’ve gotta go for now (youth event)

Have fun!

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks about the art! Can’t say I’ve heard of StarFox, but it sounds like it would look like my drawing haha.

Your welcome! Yeah, it’s a really old videogame from Nintendo.

1. Worldbuilding is amazing! I have to cut back to avoid overwhelming people lol. Aspects? Describing how things look to my character, or how they seem. Kind…

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=) You’re welcome!

1. Cool! My fantasy has three species for sure but I considered adding a fourth…but I dunno. XD I love that she learns to trust God, that’s a great theme!

2. XD I guess we’re even, I can’t draw cartoon animals very well. I can do realism of them if I have a photo to copy but other than that they’re not very…[Read more]

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Hello Ava! I like Rina’s design! I’m SarahSmile, and I’m also a home-schooler new to highschool (I’m in 9th grade)!  I like historical fiction and mysteries, but my active WIP is sci-fi. I haven’t really done any fantasy. Some hopefully unasked questions:

1. What’s your favorite color?
2. What time of day do you do the most…

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Alright, sounds good! Is that to add friends or what? Sorry kinda new to this haha.

Oh just realized what the tag thing was haha.

XD XD

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Here’s my proper response. Nice to meet you Ava! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I’m a homeschooled writer about to leave highschool! XD I love math and fundamental divine truth, and discussing that through writing. I’m a sci-fi/fantasy writer as well, and I promise that you will see a lot more of that here! My current WIP is actually a…[Read more]

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Thanks for the tag!

@kyronthearcanin

Hi, nice to meet you! =)

I really like your art style! The detail is cool.
I’m also homeschooled and a writer because that clearly isn’t obvious XD
Oh and I guess I’m supposed to tell you about myself as well

Uh I’m also an artist, I write fantasy (my current WIP is a fantasy/mystery but my…[Read more]

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Welcome! I’m Acancello! I’m also home schooled and I love acting! I also love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😀 ! I’m so glad you could come to KP! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions 🙂

1. Whats your favorite season? Spring, summer, winter…

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Hi Ava! Imma tag a bunch of people first, then I’ll respond properly:

@gwyndalf-the-wise, @mineralizedwritings, @loopylin, @esther, @lightoverdarkness6, @godlyfantasy12, @whalekeeper, @acancello, @princesschronicle22, @freedomwriter76, @80strish, @otherworldlyhistorian, @others-I-likely-forgot