Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@keilah-h

Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?

@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.

Yep XD

@thearcaneaxiom Fair point.  Although this might have not been a current thing–perhaps it happened in the past, and the arcanin quickly settled it….and that helped the felisaro too, even if it wasn’t intended.

@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just…[Read more]

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin

Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom Your point about Dune not having thumbs is interesting, considering the fact that Quelin and Rina apparently have them? @kyronthearcanin Is that a major point in the story? Like maybe the other species used to (or currently) look down on the felisaro because they’re “lesser” or “not as advanced” because they don’t have thumbs.

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I’m so sorry for not responding to this after so long, I just now was able to get around to reading it. It’s really good! I like the cast of characters you got going, and you really seem to be building up on the idea of whether or not Quelin is friend or foe, is that going to turn into a major theme or arc?

A few…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin You’re welcome! I LOVE your story ideas so far. I’ve had ideas kinda like it but haven’t exactly fleshed them out much.

@kyronthearcanin Wow! That was fun, I can’t wait for more!

I have one thing you could add. It doesn’t actually have to do with this particular chapter but with the layout of the entire book. In series such as Wings of Fire or Warriors, where there are multiple factions of characters battling (dragons and cats respectively) the book opens with an…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

OOOOO this was twisty! I second Landri, I also would binge read this XD

So, the fight where Sorren showed up seemed to come out of nowhere.

I’m very curious to see if Quelin shows back up… *eagerly awaits next chapter*

@kyronthearcanin

Thank you for sharing it! Reading was a pleasure and I hope you’ll post more!

@kyronthearcanin That sketch is amazing! 😍 How long have you been drawing?

@freedomwriter76 @orielle21 @landric @kyronthearcanin @anyone else who tagged me in the last couple of days that I missed

I haven’t gotten caught up on notifs so if I haven’t responded to you this is why, sorry about that! I’ll try to get back to y’all within the week…and I know some of you sent me story snippets or chapters (which YAY that’ll…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Nice job on your chapter two! (I’m super invested now, by the way. I’d totally already be on chapter fifteen if this was published. XD)

Okay, a couple of things that are jumping out at me on my first read-through…

1. I think you could use a bit more battle description. Maybe I got lost somewhere, but exactly what started this…

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@kyronthearcanin

This is great!! It hits close to home for me; as a nursing student, almost all of my fantasy/sci-fi characters are medics and healers. (I know, I know, strange mashup of reality and fantasy 🙂

First off, I loved your characters and explanations of races/kinds. Everything made sense to me in that regard. Plus, I’m a sucker for…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

(I was never arguing for complete evolution. God clearly made Humans separate from other animals and on the different days of creation made specific types of creatures.  I am saying that I think it likely that during Noah’s time there were less animals (and that it is possible these were only ancestor animals of stuff around to…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

( I have not been to Ark Encounter but my grandparents have.

For the question of Noah’s ark (and getting the animals inside), I would personally use evolution to explain it (I feel like evolution gets a bad rap because some people take evolution too far and try to use it to explain away God. If you think about it though it…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

I like novellas too! I’ve finished two novellas and a novel, so I’m not exactly sure which are my favorite.

I think you have good sense on the sequel debate. I, for one, love sequels, but I really hate BAD sequels, if you know what I mean. Sometimes, you’ve really said everything you need to say about certain characters, and the…[Read more]

Godly I can’t tell if the second part of it means to tell the arcs of the characters other people mention of yours or the ones that you yourself liked…so I’ll do ones that other people mention unless you specify it’s the other cause I got a lot.

Soooo: ARCS

Luca: His is positive. He learns to be less…scared of abandonment.

Derek: His is…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Has God not worked through our free will since forever?

Indeed, has not God known everything since eternity past?

Is this not the true art of answer within a question? Is this the true way? Would God not approve such skilled use of questions?

Are questions dangerous in any way? There is a skill and art to everything, but can it…[Read more]