Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in

Part 2 is out now! Thanks for reading! 🤗

@kyronthearcanin

Very intriguing! It captures a very classical fantasy vibe quickly with swords, prophecies… as well as dragons of course, I’m interested where you will take that. I will say that the pacing felt a little weird to me, not because your getting into it too quickly (I’m far worse with that), but because it felt like Kirah was too…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ooooh! I’ll definitely read this when I get the time! 👍 😄

@kyronthearcanin

Your welcome!

No rush! I know how that can be.

@kyronthearcanin I like it!! It reminds me just a bit of a story I’ve been working a bit on based off How to Train Your Dragon, but mine’s kinda more of a rip-off…..I love the worldbuilding on it though, which is why I keep it.

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! And I get it, sometimes I even confuse myself with worlds that I built. 🤣

Oh good it’s not just me! 😅🤣

Hmmm…. Good question. I guess I’d like to know if the characters are believable. This first chapter I don’t have as many problems with… The second chapter is where things seem to kind of get weird. I’m a pantser,…

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@kyronthearcanin

I really like this! I’m not usually into reading fantasy that much because excessive world building leaves me often confused, but you did a good job giving us just enough info about the world without it being overwhelming. Also, I love the mysteriousness. Is there anything specific you want comments on?

@kyronthearcanin

Wow! I’m on the edge of my seat! Nicely done, Solfyre!

@kyronthearcanin @freedomwriter76 Thanks!

@kyronthearcanin

Hey! Lovely to meet you! I love Venus flytraps too, but I think my favourite carnivorous plants are pitcher plants, they’re so cool and come in such diverse colours and shapes!

Alright, your questions!

1. You can’t make me choose between my children! But I think my favourite is my Celtic fantasy.

2. This WIP is about a you…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Cool! I’ve been thinking about writing some articles as well, as I’ve had a few epiphanies and pressing thoughts while writing recently…

Anyways, as for you question, honestly the best answer I can give you is to write about something you are most captivated by at the moment. Has there been anything related to writing pressing…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oo, I like his arc! And the cottage-core woodsy aesthetic too

 
@loopylin
Thank you!

@kyronthearcanin

Wow, I really like Rina! She sounds so cool

@gwyndalf-the-wise

I like Teilo’s name! And I think you did pretty good on the aesthetic list 😂

@kyronthearcanin

OOOO I like them all! =D

Arwen Kilmer

(Main character)

She is 17 with curly dark brown hair, deep brown eyes, and a brown complexion. Human.

She lives in Hedquist with her mother and baby brother. Her father disappeared on a trading ship to the island Snidd two years prior to the events of this story. Arwen is brave at heart and longs for adventure. She hates the…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin Awesome!

@kyronthearcanin Cool!! I really like your character designs.

@kyronthearcanin Nice!!

@kyronthearcanin That’s ok! It won’t let you do more than one picture in a post for some reason, so that might be why.

@kyronthearcanin

Yw!! 😀