Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@loopylin @esther-c @kyronthearcanin

Rampart

The smoky-colored wolf stared down the hallway Ridley had run off to, but then turned to Derek. “I don’t know, but whatever you do, I’m in.”

“Same with me.” Rampart flicked his tail, glad there was no timid boy around to accidentally skewer, and then risk the wrath of everyone else.…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin @folith-feolin @godlyfantasy12

Thanks y’all for the help!!

I almost forgot, but one charrie is going to have a negative arc, so I guess that could be what Godly called, like, becoming numb or dying spiritually/emotionally.

And I think another charrie is going to receive a life threatening injury and it’s going to affect Ami a l…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Amazing!! 🤩 I can’t wait to read the next chapter!! (Please tell me you’re almost done!)

Just a few things I noticed: (Sorry if you weren’t looking for critiques. And feel free to ignore any of this! Just trying to be helpful)

The one scene with her standing on the top of the ship — it kept going back and forth between…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

HEYO  world builders I have a question! Sorry to anyone I excluded XD wasn’t entirely sure who to ask??

Anyway I have another question (expect quite a from meh lol

So I have heard differing things on this online, but regarding Ha…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Oh, cool! Yeah, we move a lot. Hopefully our next will be our last for a while.

I know! He is 🥰

Thanks for tagging, by the way!

See you around!

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks for the tag!

@hybridlore

Hi, nice to meet you! I’m also Christian, homeschooled, and I also write about whatever and not a specific genre. XD

How do you reply to part of a message? I’ve seen it done, but I have no clue how to do it xD

1. You copy the text you want to reply to (press control or command key, and while y…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin @starshiness What if she’s half elf and half human? Just spitballing here, but that would make sense why she’s partially magic/elvish, but looks human.

But I also really like the shapeshifter idea too…I think it would work if she made a deal with the wizard to turn her into a shapeshifter too!

@folith-feolin

Cool 👍

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! I have mermaids already, and I agree, they can be creepy sometimes 😬 😂

@esther-c

Okey dokey 👍

@keilah-h @gwyndalf-the-wise @awsumfaith @esther-c @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @thearcaneaxiom @euodia-vision @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @joy-calle @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76

OH MY GOSH I AM BACK TO THIS FORUM XD XD!!! That I created…

OK OK OK!!! Getting back on track…

I have already Posted Ara’s character,…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin Ok! I really love the idea.

@kyronthearcanin Yea true. Oo I like the shapeshifter idea. But idk how that sounds or how it would tie in with the story.. unless someone else wants to lend the creative juices bc I’m fresh out XD

@kyronthearcanin I think the stakes were fine there! I would suggest you build it up a bit more in the next chapter (although you already said you were going to do that). And it is a first draft, so you don’t have to get it perfect the first time.

I’m liking this so far!! Rina’s healing magic is cool.

@godlyfantasy12 wait a sec, Ridley has one eye? Did he lose it somehow, or was it like a mutation or something? @loopylin @esther-c @kyronthearcanin

Rampart

Ridley thrashed for a bit before stopping.

His little human nails apparently weren’t useless after all. He’d drawn blood with them while clutching the sides of his head.

His eye glowed…[Read more]

@keilah-h @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12

Derek

Derek watched as Ridley ran down the hall. He had a fleeting thought to chase after him, but he decided it was best to let him be.

Derek ran a hand through his hair and looked down at his dark combat boots. That kid… something was, not wrong, but different about him… and that som…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Yep, what they (@kyronthearcanin and @euodia-vision) said! XD

@kyronthearcanin

I’m behind on the reading, just finished chapter 5

So…Dune looks like a cat??? XD I went the entire first four chapters thinking he was a bird. *facepalm*

AAaand now I’ve finished chapter six.

Okay, I love this group. They’re hilarious, this is going to be fun.

I’m tired and so don’t have any suggestions for you, I’m sorry.

@freedomwriter76 @loopylin @esther-c @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @gwyndalf-the-wise @princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings

HEYOO!!

so…..I wrote some today…

And…as I was writing…something took a bit of a turn and I was like HEH!!! Ok angst time XD

so, I couldn’t figure out totally what I wanted to do for th…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin @janellebelovedpig @godlyfantasy12 @starshiness @mineralizedwritings

Oooooh! This story is getting really good! I dont know how to add on though…. Does anyone else? Here it is so far!

One bright sunny day, I watched a girl leap over a rotten log and land with a splash in a muddy puddle. She was beautiful,daring and braver tha…[Read more]