Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@jonas @keilah-h @rae @lydibug @loopylin

Hey y’all! Is anyone interested in keeping this going?

I’ve been gone for a while and let’s just say I’ve had a lack of RPs. Lol. I also have a really good character that would work for this, so is this still happening??

If not, totally fine. 😉

@grcr

Lol, writing was my main hobby for years, and now that I’m hoping to make it my career (or at least part of it) I’m doing it just as much but more seriously. Definitely took me a while to write that much lol.

@princesachronicle22

*appears*

Yes, I’ve been gone from KP for a long time. I WISH TO CHANGE THAT. XD

So… today’s been great! Writing, worship, toddlers… lots of fun lol.

@ellie-wingfeather

Okay, so I disappeared from KP for a while because of busyness but hopefully that’s changing now!! XD

I tend to lean towards fantasy and sci-fi, though I sometimes end up with adventure/contemporary.

I’ve written seven novels. Three in the “Pantoria” series which was co-authored (each one was about 60k), three in the “Twelve…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yeah, that totally makes sense! And you’re welcome, I really enjoyed reading it!!

For buildup, I’m not quite sure. Maybe Mason has a big decision to make, and something about the king helps him make that decision? Or maybe to keep it more line with what you have so far, something big rests on the identity of the king?? I’d have to…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay, I’m finally here!! XD

So, I was digging pretty hard to find something to critique, so I’ll do my best…

“A hint of fear is smothered in the master’s gruff tone.” – why the fear?? Just because of the curfew?

I agree that it was pretty obvious the man was going to be the king.

In first person it’s really easy to use “is” a lo…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yeah XDXD Although I’ve had alien-like people with blue hair, too lol

Oh definitely, I see it all the time. I think that’s why it bothers me so much XD

@hybridlore

Yeah, haha, she was a runaway. Her blue hair made her stand out. But I wrote that a long time ago, and the style is terrible XD

And trust me, I struggle with plenty of other things. For one, not using the same words over and over lol.

This is something that I pay pretty close attention to, so I feel like I have a little bit more of a range.

With hair color I have a fairly even split between red, brown, blonde, white, and black, even some blue, so I think I’m good there lol.

With eye color I have even more of a range. I’ve gone with green, blue, hazel, amber, gray, purple,…[Read more]

@hybridlore Thanks!! 😁

@savannah_grace2009 Hi! So for the record, when I do maps of cities, I generally draw them separately. However, if your map is big enough you can draw buildings as small squares/other shapes, depending on how they’re built. Axiom is right, there are many different angles. If you draw a city up beside mountains or trees,…[Read more]

@rae

Okay, awesome!! Can’t wait to read it!!! 😁

@hybridlore

No, it’s not annoying at all! I honestly am super forgetful and just forget to check KP and stuff lol. So yeah, it actually helps a lot!

I’ll probably be leaving in May, because that’s when my subscription ends. I’ll still be on other stuff but I just want to put that money towards other things, if that makes sense. 😉

@hybridlore

*Is trying to think of a character to use this on* *Doesn’t want to spoil anything in Healer/the sequel* XD

Oh btw I think I might call the sequel “Outlaw,” to fit the character sort of like “Healer” did. 😉

@hybridlore

Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:

@rae

Hey! So yeah, I love and write sci-fi, and I love this story!! You’re a very talented writer. I agree with everything hybridlore said – on the topic of long/short paragraphs, I think it’s a thing where people have…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Yep, @jonas got it! XD

@thearcaneaxiom

Wow, I really love this!! The concept is definitely something I could never pull off, so great job there. And the characters were completely relatable. You’re very good at conveying emotions in your writing – something I still struggle with a lot, because I don’t do it well irl either lol. Anyway, awesome job!!