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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Also, on a side note, the Serpenree in the black cloaks actually drank from a special lake on Arcania. The planet itself is magical, not just the Arcanin. The lake gave them limited powers, though they and Dragor won’t admit that he sent them to get it. The lie that it came from the Celestial Phoenix is just a cover up.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Rina discovers her power when she heals a Falcor on the planet Aavian. She is only able to stop the pain at first, and thinks he might never fly again, but by morning he is magically healed. That’s when she kind of starts to realize it, anyway. She’s actually unable to heal herself for the most part, and if she does, it has to be…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
I will admit, I probably don’t have enough figured out for a kind of sample, though I will be continuing work on it. I’ll post a sample once I have enough words figured out lol.
When the book starts, the language is a fairly new thing, which is why it has been able to stay a secret. It would be rough to decrypt because the…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Also just caught that I forgot to capitalize Serpenree at one point. Whoops lol
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
For anyone who’s interested, here’s chapter 1 of my WIP, Healer. It’s sort of long lol
I’ll tag some people just in case you want to read it: @freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @artsy-dragon @mineralizedwritings
Sorry if I forgot to tag anyone who was interested! I’m fairly sure I got most of you 😅
Chapter 1
I can still…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Also, what’s with the ranks? How does that work? I feel all shady as the Bumbling Henchman lol
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
@princeschronicle22
Nice to meet you! And thanks about the profile, I actually made it with an AI lol.
Healer is all from Rina’s perspective. There are five races, basically based off animals, and they each have their own planet. Serpenree are based off snakes/lizards, Felisaro are based off cats, Lupinari off of wolves, Falcor off of birds, and…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Thanks!
Turns out I’m back early, so I’ll go ahead and answer your questions!
1.I’m not sure on favorite dessert, but I’m chips over sweets anyday (yeah, I’m weird, I know)
2. Spanish because we’re getting a lot more Spanish-speaking people in our area, and Hebrew so I could study the Bible more easily.
3. Random fact? I play…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Ooh that riddle made my head hurt lol. Also, I’m playing around with a secret language for one of my races.
Sorry about that! I’ve gotta go for now (youth event), but I promise to get back to you tomorrow morning! Sorry again!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
@freedom76
Tried to reply, but couldn’t tell if it worked lol
Thanks! 9th graders are awesome lol
My favorite color is probably blue.
Time of day… Mostly afternoon and early morning. (when I’m not doing school, mostly)
First started writing when I was in kindergarten lol, and back then it was nonfiction actually. I still mess…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Is anyone thinking about joining the Reverie (on the Kingdom Trinity)? The concept sounds cool.
I thought about it, but I’d have to get some stories up on here first, I think three. I’m already working on a short story set in Venice, so I suppose I could put that up.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Nice to meet you! Love divine truth, have kind of an interesting relationship with math lol. It’s so cool you’re writing with your sister! I write sometimes with my friends, but just for fun.
Thanks about the art! Can’t say I’ve heard of StarFox, but it sounds like it would look like my drawing haha.
1. Worldbuilding…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey! Nice to meet you, and thanks about the art 🙂
1. My story has five different races, living on five different planets. I’m working on plotting (more of a pantser myself lol), but it’s about saving prisoners from the Serpenree (one of the races, based off snakes/lizards) king, Dragor.My character changes a lot. She learns…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Glad I can be here! All those things you love, I agree, are awesome. Pretty sure I’d have a dog if my mom wasn’t allergic.
1. Favorite season? Mostly anytime without rain, but if I had to pick, probably fall. All pretty leaves and nice breezes.
2. I don’t play sports on a team (anymore), though I used to play softball and soccer on a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh just realized what the tag thing was haha.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Alright, sounds good! Is that to add friends or what? Sorry kinda new to this haha.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Hoping that tag worked haha.
Anyway, nice to meet you!
1. Snakes are absolutely cool!
2. Favorite theme? Trying to figure out this question. I don’t know if you meant genre or something else, sorry.
3. Rina was a prisoner most of her life until, near the start of the book, she escaped. She’s wary of the race that…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
I write mostly stories, but I’ve written articles and poems as well.
My name is Ava, and I’m a homeschooled writer about to go into high school. Some of my favorite authors are Bryan Davis, Wayne Thomas Batson, and Christine Cohen. Currently I am in a writing critique group, and in it I am working on my main WIP, Healer, kind of a sci-fi and…[Read more]
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