KydonAndWillow

@jonas

I think I like Spectrachromy/lurgy the best. I also like Chromamancy.

@the_lost-journal

Sorry I’m late in getting back to you.

Yeah, that was a creepy story. I don’t have too much to say about it—I agree with Linus about the pacing. I, too, like your use of repetition here. 😊

in my reached up to my ears, to feel them blood… leaking out of them…

I think I get what you’re saying here, but I had a bit of a hard time…[Read more]

@hybridlore

It looks great! This was a cool idea. I think you did a good job inserting a theme into such a tiny paragraph. Out of curiosity, how much do you have left in the word count?

Thanks!! Oh yes, that was so hard! I was going to keep it lighthearted and goofy, and then I was like, Hold on. And tried something a little different. 😛

Ummm… a…[Read more]

@grcr

No worries!! :))

@elishavet-pidyon

Lol! Frfr 🤣

@liberty

sounds great!! Tysm!!

@liberty @keilah-h

Thanks ladies!! I will definitely consider that!

@theducktator

Thank you!! Yes, I love it too!

@the_lost-journal

Oh…

I just feel bad :/

I don’t like it when I hurt people’s feelings  😥

@keilah-h

yeahhhh lol

I just asked ChatGPT to write a cringy story for me lolll

🔥🔥 THE LEGEND OF SIR BURGERFACE 2: REVENGE OF THE EVIL BROCCOLI KING’S COUSIN’S PET GOLDFISH 🔥🔥
Once upon a time, in the SUPER AWESOME kingdom of Snacktopia, Sir Burgerface was CHILLING on his golden throne made of curly fries, sipping a milkshake of power. Everybody loved him because he…

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@the_lost-journal

…?

oh…

😓

I’m so confused…did I say something wrong? I was just saying that I like your name!!

I’m sorry if something I said hurt your feelings… :/

@keilah-h

also I’m still laughing about “bRiNg a MeLoN” lollll

It’s my favorite thing ever hahaha

@keilah-h

yessss I get like this too, I decide a scene is cringey, but I like it too much to remove it.

YES YES YES YES YESSSSSS

that’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard XDXD

What are they gonna do to Sef’s little sis?

Well…its kinda a long story and it’s gonna give away a lot (I also need to flesh out the plot wayyy more)

When I have all m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…

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@stephie

I HAVE RIZZ

slayyyy

@the_lost-journal

omccc

I like your name!!! It’s so cool!!!

yeah, just like Hybridlore, I didn’t know if it was your real name or not lol…

But it’s so unique and cool!

I’ve been pronouncing it “Kee-fa” *dies laughing*

@the_lost-journal @anyone @random-stalkers

Okay, uh, yeah. I’ve talked to my mom, and I’ve got a total change of plans. I’m not going to post my writing related to TPE on here. this topic can just fade into oblivion for now. heh… 😅😅😑😅

@the_lost-journal

Umm… I need to figure some things out. My mom thinks I should use the book as a ref for a comic version of this story, and if I do that I may not need the writing to be edited too much, and if that’s the case then I won’t really be posting on here…… but idk…

I’ve shared this chapter a lot on here. But here it is again, in its close to final state.

CHAPTER I

It was a beautiful spring day in Burne. The clear sky and bright sun alluded to summer. Flowers bloomed their pretty faces amidst the grassy neighborhood yards, and the wind whispered to the trees. The world displayed no favoritism to the…[Read more]