KydonAndWillow

@elizabeth-hearten

Thanks! Yeah, I really like Septrum, my sister keeps saying it sounds not as cosmic for some reason though, so I’m still not sure. Hebrew is really cool! Thanks for point that out, I don’t know if I’ll go with it, but It’s definitely worth looking into. I suppose another thing is that the “planets” are not what makes up the…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

I think I need more context for him to know what your going for, but I think I like Kalos the most as a villain name, though it is simple.

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

No please, geeking out is the best! I am a Sanderson fan, and I highly recommend starting Stormlight, I’ve only had the chance to read Way Of Kings so far in the series, but it’s amazing! And yes, I’ve watched his lectures, they’re really good, and I also recommend them to anyone else who may have not watched them. The cool…[Read more]

@elizabeth-hearten and @everyone

Thanks for making this forum! I’m a conlanger, so the origins of most of my names are typically from one of my languages, but it’s always great to hear other’s thoughts. I think I’m a bit of a snob when it comes to things like this though, and worldbuilding in general for that matter, sorry if I ever come off that…[Read more]

@artsy-dragon

Yeah! That’s a great worldbuilding tip he gave! It’s really cool to be able to create a world completely different from our own, but when we ground it in a few subtle realisms, it feels far more tangible, consistent, real, even if those realisms are exaugurated. It can really add a whole other layer of depth to your world when you…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! I’m not sure if I’ve been able to make intrigue for his character in my actually righting yet though. I still struggle with characters. I can make interesting trials, but a character isn’t their trail, though that’s a big part of what makes them. I’m glad that I got your attention though!

@artsy-dragon

Thanks!

“How dare you not tell me how it ends lol.”

*gives a malevolent laugh

Yeah, I hope I able to get that effect with my writing. I think I have good pros, but I’m still figuring out how to really write my characters.

That’s really cool! Do you get into the actual biology of them much, or is it just the different…[Read more]

@artsy-dragon

Awesome, well in that case, I’ll give the summery.

It is set in the end of the first era in my septrum. It’s about a character, Tailen who is attacked by four dimensional beasts. They throw him back into three dimensional space, and turned out to be one of the very few that actually survived such a encounter. However, he suffers a…[Read more]

@artsy-dragon

She looks awesome!

Thanks btw. I’m glad I was able to catch feeling in it for you! I’m always open to telling you about some of the story if your interested:)

@loopylin

Thanks! That being said though, I really don’t think it’s a hard program to learn, it’s simple and intuitive. I think the hatred arises from the fact that it’s seen as a cheap program that doesn’t have a large variety of features, and it’s not always seen as a true “art program” because it’s mainstream use is for making diagrams for…[Read more]

@otherworldlyhistorian

Yep, lol! I haven’t even heard about any dev mode or OS! I really need let go of my strange obsession with my current software crutch and pay more attention to reality…

@keilah-h

Thanks!

@loopylin

Thanks! If you have a gmail account, you can go onto google drive and one of the features is google drawings. It’s a simple free vector art program, but it tends to be universally hated. I just like proving a point that it has great potential as an art program, you just need to learn a few tricks to abuse and take…[Read more]

Here’s one:

Hi Ya’ll! I just now skimmed through this forum, and I gotta say, Ya’ll got some EPIC art!

My niche is google drawings, I like abusing any random features for some cool visuals. here’s one artwork I made for a potential cover for one of my stories:

What do y’all think?

@princesachronicle22

Liren

The fortress was unlike any architecture I’ve seen. As I approached, I tried to pinpoint the age, something I’ve grown quite skilled in ever since… well, sense Kirrtes. It was always something Kirrtes had me do for some reason. I don’t think I’ll ever know why. It has almost turned into a game for me though, a…[Read more]

@felicity

Jonathan… XD

@acancello

Oooh, ok! I’ll have my charries answer number 1.
What would you do if you found a $100 bill?
Ami: …

Ev: …

Finally,

Ev: What’s a dollar bill?

Ami: *shrugs* Maybe it’s a type of currency…

Me: One Aletheian drek is equal to two American dollars.

Ev: Oh, ok. So 100 dollars is 50 dreks! Sweet! After exchang…[Read more]

@felicity

Wow. That was super fun/scary to read! Is there a second book? I mean, there’s got to be more! 🙂

I’m glad you enjoyed it!! There is of course more!! 😀 As of now, it is only existent in my head though… XD When I start writing, I’ll post it!

I really like how you described the aunt and uncle. I could totally picture the cottage.

Yay!! &#x1f97…[Read more]

@not-so-secret-secret-assassian

I am the #1 Wingfeather Saga hater. Anyone who disagrees with me will be mysteriously assassinated within the next couple of days (not on the weekends tho)

*horrified gasp* SAY WHAT NOW?!?!

*clears throat*

I have read your post about WFS when I stalked the forum and I can only  agree on bits of it. The first book…[Read more]

@mineralizewritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6

Here are the last three chapters!!! (Sorry it took me so long. I kept forgetting. XD) It’s pretty fast-paced, in my opinion. So don’t mind that. I may fix it in the second draft.

I do not have a chapter of Asher and Ev’s conversation. It may be in the secon…[Read more]