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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
@savannah_grace20009
Interesting, so in that case, what would have allowed a universal language to come about? A grand unification? Maybe just a tongue similar to what is happing with English that simply became more important to know for politics and trade? Also, where do magic words come from? What makes them inherently different from other…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
That would be fun!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Great! What language would it be? Would you want a universal Andromedan tongue, or something for each of the groups, or even something else entirely?
Just a universal Andromedan language and some magic words.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@acancello @savannah_grace2009
I think it should be Victorian and in France and all. That would be awesome!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Yeah, how I think of it is by their fruits you shall know them. But to know the fruits of something, you either have to judge by the spirit beforehand, or you have to put it into practice to know whether it be good or evil. The problem is that while good trees produce good fruit, and bad trees produce bad fruit, there are some things…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Makes sense. Though that leaves me with some questions about the first chapter still. Why give Jordan and his wife such a beginning? Despite making it obvious that they are evil, you’ve humanized them by giving them a dying child, and having them feel grief. Also, why did you project Kratos in a negative light almost directly, w…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Has anyone else read the Dragons in Our Midst series? in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
I haven’t, no, but the name does sound vaguely familiar 🤔 idk where I would’ve heard it before though.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
hopefully Kari and Ottoline will be friends! They have some things in common!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
This is about to be fun!
…It does seem like we need more female characters though…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Mistborn: Mistborn vs. Mistings in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
This is great! I’ll have to try later 😂
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
This seems fun, a masquerade would be cool because we won’t show the character’s face, allowing us to show them in an either more hidden light, where their true character is behind the mask, vs a more open light, where when there face is hidden, their true colors and personality can come out. I might add a character here…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Mistborn: Mistborn vs. Mistings in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Fun idea! And nice strategy!
(Note on time bubbles: the bubbles cannot move. The person who created the bubble cannot leave without popping it. Objects entering or leaving the bubble are deflected wildly off course. For a person, having any part of your body in side the bubble is enough to be affected by it.)
(Extra note: the bubbles can…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
I love accents too!
Just a note, I won’t be able to RP for a little while as I am still pretty busy… 🙃
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants. This is gonna be fun!
@grcr I love british accents!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants. This is gonna be fun!
@grcr I love british accents!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 12 months ago
Yeah I still can’t and I’ve tried every day 🙁
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@savannah_grace200 @esther-c @acancello @hybridlore @mineralizedwritings
Hey guys!
My character’s name is Lane Shultz.
He’s 14 years old. He’s quiet, loyal, a bit stubborn (sometimes), and he easily becomes stressed.
Lane has long brown hair, pale skin, brown eyes, and he wears a hat backwards. He usually wears a pastel-green hoodie and bla…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Sorry, i’m not good at explaining things, especially my stories! All I know is that Earth is the same Earth, and I think that Adam and Eve don’t exist either in “stories” or anything. I think that I’m trying to make this story for the secular world to speak truth (i think sometimes if the world knows that somethings from the…
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