KydonAndWillow

@jonas

Oh no XD

Vethe

Vethe coughed, rising to her feet. “I don’t think you and I are going to get along very well.” She said, laying a hand on her sword. “You don’t strike me as a very good king.”

And with that she ran.

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Congratulations, Koshtin, it seems like Vethe’s going to defect without even fighting the heroes 🤦‍♀️

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

You guys have already read the next chapter, the one where Lilitu steals the loaf of bread. So I’ll skip to the fourth chapter, when Lilitu’s walking home from his thievery, lol

And as always, don’t feel like you have to read it. I don’t want anybody panicking, lol

Chapter 4: Strange Magick

Lilitu stood at the edge of…[Read more]

@rae

Yeah, I was a little worried about that…do you think it would help if I gave Brenna’s master a name? The young soldier must remain unnamed, for my own reasons, but I could give the master a name. I’ll rearrange the paragraphs so it’s easier to understand what’s going on.

Yeah, I think that would help a lot.

For the title, maybe “Murderer”?

@jonas

you’re fine!! no worries! 🙂

@rae

Yeah, I noticed the same thing as Freedom. It did get a little confusing. But overall it’s really good!

@thearcaneaxiom

Um….I just listened to it and….how?????

How is that physically possible! that’s kinda disturbing, XD

It’s so good though!

Vethe

The King had a point. If she was in Celestiar, what planet was she on?

“Very well,” She said, “And if I leave?” Vethe glared at the King. “What’s to stop me from walking out of this room? You have no power over me.”

@rae

Oooh I like it!

@esther-c

Livia

“Do you know what dorm you’re staying in?” Callista asked her.

Liv shook her head. “No, I just got here. Is there a place to go check in or something? I thought there would be more people around…where is everyone?”

@rae

yeah, sorry, My brain kinda died.

No, you’re fine. XD

Fynn

Fynn shoved his hands into his pockets as they fell into an awkward silence. Thankfully, he didn’t have to come up with anything to say as he saw Callista by the front doors standing next to a girl with blue hair and horse of the same color.

“Hey, Callie!”

She looked up and smi…[Read more]

@hybridlore

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THAT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you!!!!!

@keilah-h

You can do a lot of things with an AI, but it depends on the model, and how you phrase a lot of things. I had to phrase it as a “game” for ChatGPT, otherwise it would say that it doesn’t have opinions, and I had to tell it to not list different views, because the point is to pit two different views against one another. GPT is also quite…[Read more]

@rae

lol 😅 I’ve been making characters since 2017, but the 335+ are from the last four years.

@loopylin

Oh, ok. Gotcha

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

I like this chapter as well!

Thanks!

Yeah, I just wanted the chapter to end on an emotional climax. I kind of wanted short chapter breaks, because I don’t like it how in books some authors make like 40 page long chapters. I kind of like it in two different chapters for some reason.

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! She’s really fun to write. 😉

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, but I’m doing better now. Haha, ikr? XD The Captain America movies are amazing🤩

That’s good! 😊

Yesss! One time when I was babysitting, the little boy I was watching was taking a nap, so his parents had let me use their tv. I was watching the first Captain America movie and the captions were on and I didn’t know how to turn…[Read more]

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76

I forget too. XD We can just pretend Ami and Clint have met up with Bucky and Riya already, if you guys are ok with that.

@rae

(btw, Fynn and Lukas are friends, not brothers. 😉 Sorry I didn’t explain that earlier. 😅)

Fynn

“Thanks. I-I’m from Shyton.” Chase paused for a moment. “You?”

“Huh, never heard of Shyt…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I watch ALL of them. I’ve watched pretty much all of his more recent videos, so I’ve been driven to watching his older content as well lol.

Me too! I miss some of his older series, but his modern content is still really good.

Oh dear, I believe we’re hijacking this thread 🤣 at least we’re not talking about Brandon Sanders…

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