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@jonas

Yeah, I’ve read both as well. The sleepless have been really interesting to learn about. And the Dawnshard was really intriguing, and having the background from what you’ve talked about before really helped.

@jonas

So I’ve been really bad at following up on this thread for quite a while now, as well as KP in general lately. I’ve sort of skimmed through, but you’ve probably done a lot since you last posted. Is there still anything specific you would like my thoughts on still?

@esther-c

That sounds really interesting!! 😄 (sorry, I don’t have much else to say lol)

@hybridlore

Yeah it is, actually. 😂 I didn’t want to write about someone getting married so I chose adoption instead. XDD

Oh and for those of you wondering, Ami’s type 2.

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @anyone-else

Sooo… I was working on some “character-building” the past day or so, and I’ve fixed my MCs’ character arcs/internal conflicts to tie into the theme more and so I can write them better/more accurately. (With a l…[Read more]

@smiley

Ack! Sorry I’m late, but I finally found time to read this. M’kay…

So the one big thing that I noticed was a lot of telling and info-dumping. I could handle the information, but it’s not always enjoyable to read a bunch of backstory. Stuff like that should be sprinkled throughout. Besides that, there were a few places where things…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Of course! (:

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @anyone

Ok, so I have bad writing, but my worst writing I deleted years ago!!! 😭 There was three chapters of a book I wrote on my parents computer when I was like 7, I tried to start a few books when I was 9/10/11, I had an almost completed book around 11, but I still have a book I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think so! You can go ahead and RP first if you want. 🙃

@hybridlore

Aww it’s cute! I actually like it! For some reason it reminds me of “A Series of Unfortunate Events” books. Idk why XD

@highscribeofaetherium

I was laughing so hard!!! The plunger gun…ahhh that was great! hahaha!

Mr Mwahaha…that’s hilarious!!

Here is something cringe-worthy:

I wrote this when I was… 12? I think? Oh well. I had a fascination with creating weird names, and I never planned a plot, so everything is crazy and all over the place…

This scene doesn’t make much sense, so sorry…

“Your the reason I have bad luck!” Yelled Jesti at the little brown cat laying on his bed.…

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@jonas

Weird.

@grcr @hanako

That’s funny. I don’t know if I’ve actually ever met an Osborne (or an Osborn) I wasn’t related to before.

Why did I make my little brother the hero of the story!?!? 🤣

I feel the need to preface this by saying no, seven-year-old me was not insane, nor a psychopath.

Pontoon Boat Catastrophe

It was a dark night. The waves crashed against the shores of Door County. We were in a pontoon boat on the enormous waves.

“We must pass the dangerous Horseshoe Island!”

exclaimed Captain Grandpa.

“Tidal wave!” yelled…

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@highscribeofaetherium

Hey!! We have the same last name!! lol

BWAHAHAHAH lookie what I’ve found… hehehe…

Prepare to have your minds BLOWN.