@koshka
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
HEYO!!! Wasn’t sure where to put this thread XD But I need some advice with writing an injury infliction scene!! (I’m also gonna use my pal google, but thought u guys might could help out too!)
SO! I am working on my draft of book 1 of my series, and in it, my female MC (Arabella’s) All Is Lost moment is when my male MC (November) is injured by…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Ezra…
*broken-hearted sniffles*
And I’m with @koshka on this one… It’s good Ezra’s attackers are fictional… XDXD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Oh, by the way, Jareth can talk to Crow sorta the way Jocelyn can talk to Nyx, but it’s not telepathic. Also, Crow doesn’t have feathers, he has spikes and scales. The drawing says “As drawn by Feather” because that’s the name of the character who drew it in the story (she’s Jareth’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Everyone seemed to notice Franz’s sudden change of behavior when Naja entered the room. How he didn’t seem quite as gruff as before. How he acted so differently with her compared to how he had with….Well…
Everyone else.
It was….strange….
And November didn’t fully grasp it.
Per…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Riker’s kind gaze and sincere words calmed November’s nerves and he let out a breath. He nodded. “Ah…I-I’m good, thanks…” November warily watched Franz out of the corner of his eyes. “Are…are you okay?”
Arabella
The little boy seemed a bit skittish still, and he was clutching his…l…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h anyone on and wanna RP?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Jocelyn
As soon as the sound reached her ears, Lyn knew….
She bolted from her sleeping spot and found herself towering above the two fighting creatures. Nearby was Naja, behind held by Alyona, and another child, a boy Lyn hadn’t seen before.
He looked extremely frightened by everyone aro…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Yes, I’d say this has escalated. XD
Alyona
Screeches and hisses filled Alyona’s ears, driving rest from her mind. She flew to her feet, heart pounding, looking for a broom – anything really.
Two animals were locked together in feirce combat. Around them hovered two children, faced stricken…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Aww, Naja is adorable. And she even looks a little like Riker!
I’ll go ahead and respond.
Viktor
Morning was here. Viktor lay perfectly still, watching the sunlight soak the walls.
His back ached, but his head had escaped injury.
He’d woken once in the… Earlier morning, just as he was…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Just going to do Jareth’s POV for now.
Jareth
“I’m Naja!” said the girl who’d found him. “What’s your name?”
“Jareth,” he said, but she didn’t seem to pay attention and was instead focused on Crow.
“Your puppy! He’s cute!”
Crow squirmed, indignant at being called a puppy, but Jareth…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
AWWW NAJA’s POV IS ADORABLE!!!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
November
November heard Crosshair speak gruffly to someone. His ears were still a bit stuffy from just waking up, and he yawned, rubbing the sleep from his eyes.
What was wrong with him?
November sat up and his blood ran cold as he spotted Franz, who was n…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Trauma club! I’m in, and so are most of my charries! I sorta like chopping characters’ arms off….Or blinding/half-blinding them…..You get the idea…..
Luckily for them and for you, Jareth and Crosshair haven’t gotten really mutilated yet. Unless you count the time Crosshair was…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna rp?
ik u did Koshka but as Zlatan or Vulkasin?? Idk lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I think we did… @koshka’s RP did anyway. Figured that’s what we would do lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
oof, question-
Franz….will probably wake up when the rest of them wake up….right?
also, it might be fun if the girls actually discover @keilah-h new character, while the guys are dealing with the newly awoken Franz.
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whaley replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka Cool, and thank you 😊
@freedomwriter76 Good job!! I love Jared… Poor thing…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka anyone wanna RP? keilah isn’t till something interesting happens.
one of y’all wanna discover her new Charrie?? When they wake up or something lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Soooo @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
anyone on? Ik it’s late soooo….
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
November
They were splitting up, which made sense, but it was still strange to be separated from Ara and Jocelyn.
He might have even felt better, had Nyx joined him, but Nyx had refused, threatening to bite anyone who forced him.
Even though he too was a boy, November supposed he was…[Read more]
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