@koshka
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Have him see someone else do something “uncomfortable” but right. Let him realize that was the right thing to do.
That’s already in my outline, too!! Golly, I have no idea what I’m doing but at least it seems to be logical. 😂
Pull out that sense of humor in his first scene, in how he views the world. Give a glimpse of who he could be, wan…
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Give him something (or someone) he cares so much about that he would risk anxious situations to protect/keep/help. It could be something simple like a pet kitten or his father’s pocket watch, or something more complex like a best friend.
I already have that! Perhaps I have made some better-than-bad choices!
What is a cause he’d be wil…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
I like Koshka’s idea.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I’m sorry! I didn’t know Aelic was your favorite!
Leo? At the moment?
Uhhh…… possibly in an Agent interrogation room……
*runs*
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle You two are on. 🙂 Any ideas? ^
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I think Leo needs you.
I kidnapped him and have been injecting him into random scenes of “flash fiction” with Rory for fun, just to see what would happen should I introduce a Leo-like character.
He keeps dying.
Tell your dude to stop saving poor lost characters. It doesn’t end well. 😭
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
wow. Okay, so does it take something brutal to make you comment, because I haven’t heard from you in ages. 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
When Leon woke, the light in the shed was very dim. He could hear the sound of voices and pounding and feet hurrying back and forth outside. “I wonder what they’re doing,” he muttered. He began to wonder how the villagers…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @rae @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk
Anyone wanna read a little sneak peek into one of my main projects? 🤭🫶
It was finally the day that marked exactly a year since Aodhán had perished.
Michael Bréagach pulled at a loose string on the s…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.
When Julian arrived, he found Marti…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
Leon, Julian, Rolf, Aelic, and Roland remained with Heinrich and Johannes at the University for five days. It was a wonderful time of fellowship and encouragement for them all. The companions would have liked to stay lon…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Eddie
Ed trotted over to Sebastian, then stood in front of him, hands on hips.
“You owe Ellie and I for dog food.”
Ellie
The soft grass and warm sun made Ellie feel a bit sleepy. She watched Eddie and Seb from under drooping eyelids, and picked at the grass next to her with one hand. After a bit, she laid…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
I don’t think I’ll be able to post today, and if I do it’ll be late this afternoon. I’m going to be busy all day.
Guns.
Yay!!!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@loopylin @koshka @whalekeeper
Thank y’all! Your comments made me smile and do little happy dances. 🙂
@Kitty
(That isn’t a bad idea)
@loopy
Thanks! The perspective was what made me want to draw it in the first place.
@Whaley
It was too boring without the shading/fur. I came back and added it on a whim. I don’t know how much of it is…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
I did my first full-page scene illustration since I was 10! lol. I think it came off better than those old ones. I tried scanning again… Not sure what I think of it. XD
This is for one of @koshka ‘s stories. Sorry Deniz’s horse didn’t make it on set too.
(Kitty, if you ever give me this kind of heart attack, I’ll do the assassin’s job for him.)

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk
I love them y’all😭🫶
So much had crumbled.
So many lives had been lost.
Leo sank against the wall, fists clenching and unclenching, every breath heavy, tears blurring his vision.
Dietrich…Fin…so many lives had been lost.
And Eze…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
Y’all, this book is rough.
The group of soldiers came to a halt in the snowy planes. “We’ll camp here for the night,” came the order.
Hans Schmitz lowered his pack and rolled his aching shoulders. His brothers came and found him from f…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@koshka @people-who-like-these-charries
Reuven&Friends
Days like this should be double pay for the teachers. Reuven watched bemused as students either passed notes or whispered behind their textbooks. The coming dance had been referenced so much in the last half hour that the teacher had begun to narrow his eyes at any whisper that sounded…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@loopylin @koshka @theducktator @raxforge @whoever
Barnes
A couple times, students wandered to the edge of the field. Barnes fixed them with a deliberate stare, tapping her wrist to indicate they wouldn’t be restricted forever.
Another kid ran up from the school entrance. This kid was paler than the others, with tufts of light hair glaring in…[Read more]
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