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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint  @theducktator  @grcr
( @kyronthearcanin    @whalekeeper      @jonas     @power ) Y’all haven’t responded, so I’ll tag you for now, but let me know if you don’t want me to anymore.
Okay all, chapter 1 is out. I’m using Microsoft Word. I think if…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@grcr @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @rae @theducktator @loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Tags didn’t work ^
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @rae @theducktator @loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @savannah_grace2009
Okay, it looks like the most popular time to start is the 14th, 15th, or 16th, so would everyone be cool with the 16th being our start date? (That’s two weeks from yesterday.) This would mean if you’re…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-idk-lol
anyone want a few little snippets from something I’m writing for fun…that probably won’t ever make it into a book but I’m writing it anyways?? 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore     @koshka    @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
BOOK AESTHETIC!!!
(characters to follow.)

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Ellette Giselle started the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint (not sure if I’m supposed to tag you or not. Let me know)
Hello all. This is going to be a wild ride. A few of y’all have agreed to help, and I’m going to tag others as well. Let me know if you’d like to back off the team and I’ll…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱
I understand that though.
A World War II spy story!
Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.
I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Really?! Ah yay!!!
Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!
Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @rae @theducktator @loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @savannah_grace2009
Okay, sorry for taking so long to get back to this. I have a google form here to figure out how to best organize this. Please fill this out, even if you are just planning on giving feedback.      …[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@hybridlore   @keilah-h
Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.
In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
QUESTIONS!
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!
NEXT SECTION!
   Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
Ugh! I posted two hours ago, but KP ate it!
NEXT SECTION!
Extra long to make up for yesterday.
 It was several hours later that the sound of steps echoed in the hall outside. Julian and Leon stood as the door opened.
The guar…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
I tend to lean towards global flood as well. That’s something I hadn’t considered regarding rock layers.
My dad says that there are a lot of generations skipped in those genealogies, and that they only recorded the more important people, so that’s why he doesn’t think that they are a very accurate way to calculate the age of…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
@the_lost-journal @keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power @freed_and_redeemed @stephie @MineralizedWritings
My family went to a museum full of fossils today, which sparked a discussion…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
no section today.
Super busy.
Sorry!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
Leon blew on his hands and rubbed them together. He stood up and went to his pack. Digging through it, he found his scarf. It was worn, and there were a few tears along the edge. He held it in both hands and though…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Sounds good!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
Leon and Julian enjoyed their time with Konner and his family, and the notice was almost forgotten in Julian’s pocket.
It was evening that they returned home. Fox had come back from the carpenters where he…
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