@koshka
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @grcr @hybridlore @theducktator
Just checking, did you see this?
I should probably tag some more people as well:
@whalekeeper @liberty @raxforge @rae @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
None of you have to read this, but I do want to make sure this notification is coming through. And my sister would greatly appreciate…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
I am too suspicious about this connection to try to open another thread to do this… I think this is the right spot though.
@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @loopylin @anyone-who-wants
I have picked up writing in my WIP a bit more the past week, although it’s a bit out of chronological order. I just…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Hey! Is anyone on? @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freed_and_redeemed @anyone-else XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
First time I’ve ever had to rewrite an rp. Stupid glitches.
@whalekeeper @raxforge @koshka
Ellie
For a long moment, Ellie stood still, staring at the teacher as her classmates talked and played behind her. Eventually, the teacher turned her expressionless mask towards Ellie. Her tail twitched. Then something connected in her brain and she…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
My internet connection with this website is abhorrent. It took ten minutes to just load into the main page. Wyoh, if thou watchest over me, go haunt someone else.
Barnes
“Hey, Miss Teacher?” One of the smallest girls asked. “Why did we leave the classroom?”
Barnes, meanwhile, was setting up her file cabinet under a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
@koshka @whalekeeper @raxforge
Ellie
Slowly, the students all formed a single file line and followed the teacher outside. Ellie followed close behind her sister, and Syph followed close behind her.
As she walked, Ellie held her backpack in both arms in front of her, trying to minimize the jostling and hoping that it wouldn’t wake Blackjack.…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
YAY!! Rax and Ben get to do something finally! Barnes is interesting though…
@whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka
Rax and Ben
The teacher gave both Rax and Ben a startle, and Rax at first was a bit rebellious. Being under a tyrant all his life he wanted to not be under anyone right now. Ben knew exactly what Rax was thinking, “If you don’t lower…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Ahh, here we go. @loopylin @koshka @raxforge the Twins, Syph, Rax, and Ben are in the same class as I’m going to describe. (It’ll take a couple posts to see what I mean.)
Barnes
Barnes was only a few doors away from her class, when her way was aggressively blocked by another female teacher. Barnes stepped left and right, but was only faced wit…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Rory
Rory was silent as the two moved down the hall. Leo’s words had a strange draw to them, and he felt as though they were pulling at his very being. For some reason, freedom made him think of the building… church… and the picture in the glass. Peace and freedom. Two things he had never experienced––
Until now.
He hadn’t tas…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Yes, he would.
Rory
Rory stared at Leo for a long moment, letting the older boy’s words play over in his mind. Leo turned to start down the hall, and Rory forced himself to keep up. “Leo…” he hesitated. “Leo, what is free? I know what my government says free is, but I think free means something different to everyone. At least, that’s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Rory
Rory didn’t say anything. It was too confusing. It didn’t make sense to him… but perhaps Leo’s world was different? If that was possible.
Rory let out a slow breath. “Leo, do you have Agents where you’re from?”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
@koshka XD That’s a lot of fruit. Maybe you’re hungry lol
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Esther replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @koshka @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @trailblazer @theducktator @grcr @theshadow
Y’all are so so so helpful!!! I wish I could reply to each individual response, but that would take a while. 🤪
The theme I’m getting from most of the responses though is that MG needs more wholesomeness, or at least that was what you enjoyed the mos…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Okay, so my brain has been reading things with interesting twists to words. I literally just read that as “We’ve reached 500 papayas, guys.”
I almost choked on my yogurt XD
Chase
Chase was confused. Did she not know if this person was a friend or not? “D-does he l-like f-faw, fawwwns?” It was random, and not the best type of q…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Your subconscious must really like papayas. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
*gasps in relief and grabs his hand like a lifeline.* NO! Not at all! I’d love to!
(my life is a wreck this week, in case you haven’t noticed. 🤣)
We redecorated the neighborhood, so to speak.
That is amazing! This two have got an awesome relationship! I can’t wait to read their book!
Rory
Rory thought very long and hard about…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
yes!! I do!!! Can I be adopted too?!?? 🥹🥺
Rory
Rory drew in a slow breath as Leo turned off the flame. For a moment that awful scene had threatened to flash through his mind. Thankfully, he’d fought it back.
This time.
“There, all done. Now we let that cool and don’t let any kids sign their names in it like they did the pavem…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Oh my word! WHY CAN’T HE BE MY OLDER BROTHER!?!? I need a Leo!!😭😍
Rory
“I’ve done this plenty,” Leo said. “Maybe not on tile, but heaps of other stuff. Did it hanging off my ship once when we had an air leak out of atmosphere.”
Ship…. atmosphere. That meant a flying ship. An airplane.
fighter jets
Rory sucked in a sharp bre…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Rory
Rory slid back, but his eyes were locked on Leo’s hands in a half memorized, half terrified stare. There was a very bad memory at the edge of his mind, and he didn’t know what it was, but he really didn’t want it let out.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
leaving the kid anywhere didn’t seem…wise. He had a back for getting into pickles.
Love that!
Rory
Rory winced slightly at the list Leo had rattled off. He’d used just about every one of those things. And the memories that accompanied the usage were bad. Very bad.
“Looks like we’ve got most of this. Ready for a blowtorch?” Leo asked…[Read more]
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