@koshka
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Rory
The sound of screeching tires flashed through his mind. Hand pushing him. Pain. Blood. Yelling.
But she had saved him.
Saved his life.
Yeah, saved me so the Agents could finish the job after interrogating me.
Rory bit his lower lip until he tasted blood. At last he let out a slow breath and looked up at Leo. “…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
YIPPY!
(though Rory won’t think so lol)
oh no! what happened?
go ahead and hook up with her then. she’s probably just outside. Maybe give Rory a little warning tho. lol.
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Loopylin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I’m here, you can connect with Barnes and get moving together.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Rory
“I said cracked, not punctured… or broken…” Rory mumbled, but he let Leo help him to the door. They slipped outside into the cool night. Rory took in a slow breath and blinked, looking around him at the dim streets. I wonder if the agents are still out here? The thought made him grip Leo tighter. “Which direction?” And before…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
If we involve Barns we have to stop RPing until she replies.
Ya know, we could just go out the back door which she’s not guarding, and then if whaley still wants to join us it would be an easy thing for Barnes to find us again.
Rory
Rory shook his head and put his hand against the wall, slowly pushing himself up. “I’m fine. I’ll…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
“I… I don’t know where… all over…” Rory blinked several times. Leo’s hands were against his face. “I feel sick,” Rory grimaced. He wasn’t sure if it was the emotions, the spent adrenaline, or the amount of times he had been hit. “The Agents had me back there,” he said slowly. He rubbed the back of his hand over his eyes, smearing…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Rory
Rory followed Leo’s gaze and saw the picture of a young man. He looked weary and depressed. He was making his way down a dusty road, his head bowed. But, just beyond him, a man was running down the front walk of a grand mansion, his arms open wide. Rory leaned on his arm, and his eyes drifted back to the picture of the shepherd. He…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
(I’m gonna cry! I want a Leo in my life! Where’s my Leo? 😭)
Rory
Something inside Rory broke at Leo’s words and tears spilled down his face. Not the violent, desperate, broken sobs he had cried before, but gentle tears. The way Leo’s hand rested on the shoulder, the way it had felt against his forehead–– Rory had never known any…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
wonderful!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
OKAY!
Well, thank you very much to any of y’all who survived all the way to the end. I’m excited to hear y’alls thoughts and I’m looking forward to lost of feedback. Here are some questions that I had. (I may have looked at your file for some question st…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
The hours passed, but there was little dread in them for Joseph. Beric slept most of the time, and when Joseph laid a hand against the boy’s forehead, he found it was still hot with fever. His own eyes burned, and he was sure Stephen was little better.
Afte…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
well, it’s 2025, but I have one section left to post, so I think I kinda did it….. in a kinda didn’t way. lolololol.
Keep an eye out as I shall be posting THE END of TVON today!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/31/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The next morning, Joseph was startled awake by the sound of keys jangling in the lock. He sat up quickly, jolting Amelia awake.
Beric rolled over and yawned.
At the other side of the room, David was a…
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Loopylin replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @mineralizedwritings @rae @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @highscribeofaetherium @liberty @hybridlore @calyhuge @smiley @raxforge @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle
I’m shooting blind, here. No idea who likes these books.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
We leaving Rory in the lurch again?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/30/24
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(it’s loonnnggggeee)
“Would you pass the bread?” Stephen asked.
Joseph handed it to him, and Stephen cut a slice. “Amelia, this is truly an amazing supper.”
“It sure is,” Joseph agreed.
Amelia smiled…
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@power @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @rae @theshadow @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @esther-c @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @grcr @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity
Some people…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/28/24
Section 1.
(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉
if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else
Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅
a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]
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