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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.
When Julian arrived, he found Marti…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
Leon, Julian, Rolf, Aelic, and Roland remained with Heinrich and Johannes at the University for five days. It was a wonderful time of fellowship and encouragement for them all. The companions would have liked to stay lon…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Eddie
Ed trotted over to Sebastian, then stood in front of him, hands on hips.
“You owe Ellie and I for dog food.”
Ellie
The soft grass and warm sun made Ellie feel a bit sleepy. She watched Eddie and Seb from under drooping eyelids, and picked at the grass next to her with one hand. After a bit, she laid…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
I don’t think I’ll be able to post today, and if I do it’ll be late this afternoon. I’m going to be busy all day.
Guns.
Yay!!!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 12 months ago
@loopylin @koshka @whalekeeper
Thank y’all! Your comments made me smile and do little happy dances. 🙂
@Kitty
(That isn’t a bad idea)
@loopy
Thanks! The perspective was what made me want to draw it in the first place.
@Whaley
It was too boring without the shading/fur. I came back and added it on a whim. I don’t know how much of it is…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 12 months ago
I did my first full-page scene illustration since I was 10! lol. I think it came off better than those old ones. I tried scanning again… Not sure what I think of it. XD
This is for one of @koshka ‘s stories. Sorry Deniz’s horse didn’t make it on set too.
(Kitty, if you ever give me this kind of heart attack, I’ll do the assassin’s job for him.)

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk
I love them y’all😭🫶
So much had crumbled.
So many lives had been lost.
Leo sank against the wall, fists clenching and unclenching, every breath heavy, tears blurring his vision.
Dietrich…Fin…so many lives had been lost.
And Eze…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
Y’all, this book is rough.
The group of soldiers came to a halt in the snowy planes. “We’ll camp here for the night,” came the order.
Hans Schmitz lowered his pack and rolled his aching shoulders. His brothers came and found him from f…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
@koshka @people-who-like-these-charries
Reuven&Friends
Days like this should be double pay for the teachers. Reuven watched bemused as students either passed notes or whispered behind their textbooks. The coming dance had been referenced so much in the last half hour that the teacher had begun to narrow his eyes at any whisper that sounded…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
@loopylin @koshka @theducktator @raxforge @whoever
Barnes
A couple times, students wandered to the edge of the field. Barnes fixed them with a deliberate stare, tapping her wrist to indicate they wouldn’t be restricted forever.
Another kid ran up from the school entrance. This kid was paler than the others, with tufts of light hair glaring in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Rory
Rory shrugged uneasily. He glanced over his shoulder again as they walked down the hall. “Do… do you think they could still be here? In the school? Watching us?”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I think blowtorching people is to violent for this RP 🤭
Rory
Rory and Leo road the elevator up to the ground floor. Rory forced himself to think about anything but the moving ground beneath him. They got off and headed toward the school entrance. As they walked through the quiet halls, Rory couldn’t help but feel the need for…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Yay!
Rory
Rory shrugged and looked down. He tested his weight on the brace a moment, and then spoke, his eyes still on the floor. “I don’t know. Something without planes or guns. A place I don’t have to kill people.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION
hopefully this doesn’t feel to fast. The end of this section is where the story really starts to kick back in. We had a lot of travel in the 3rd book, and I’m trying not to literally go back over ground we already covered.
It was a bitterswee…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
FIRST SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Dawn Will Come
Draft 4
My soul waits for the Lord
more than watchmen for the dawn,
more than watchmen for the dawn.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
I don’t particularly enjoy heaven scenes either, but when an author takes a moment to show that God is actually with us down here, like when Aaron knew Jesus was so close and when the Maker talks to Janner at the Fane of Fire and felt the love of the Maker wrap around him at the end…that’s beautiful. It reminds us that ev…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
YES!! I am 100% in agreement with that! Those are the kinds of scenes that I love.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Ah, I see.
Okay yes, that makes sense. I tend not to write heaven scenes. (I always cringe for that scene in Les Misserables) I don’t know why, but I like to keep clear. Hmm, interesting with the Aaron comment. I’m interested what makes you think that.
I don’t mind Screwtape or Warden and the Wolf King, I like how both of those were…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Woah! Hi!
1)There will be mob fights.
Not sure where you go that from the board, but interesting guess…………
2)Nearly everyone we love will get hurt.
why would you ever think that?! 😢
🤣
3)Leon and Jullian’s pasts will come back to haunt them.
🤔
4)There will not be a plane crash, or a nuclear war.
Oh, well thanks for s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
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