@koshka
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Oh btw y’all…I haven’t really thought about this….but thinking on it now….I think GRIMm would have some battle scars…
He was the leader of the small rebellion in his home, and I think he’d probably have some scars on his body.
Im thinking some along his torso, back, and one that runs across his sh…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka BTW!! Nyx is gonna be a lot better with trusting this time around, so he won’t be near as bad toward Zlatan. He’ll actually be more like “Oh yea, we know these guys. Hey.” XD and Zlatan will be probably be like whaat? Also the fact that he now sounds like 13-14….XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Nyx & Grimm
Grimm lifted the torch aloft, shining it’s light across the dark cavernous expanse. He grimaced at the sight of hollowed rock and and stone, giving way to a staircase.
The walls seemed slick, old. Crusted over with grime and cracked with age. Whoever kept this castle obviously didn’t kee…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka imma RP with GRIMm and Nyx! So it’s okay with the characters recognizing the Twins right?
im guessing the twins just kinda don’t remember everything about the castle rn? But maybe seeing some ppl will remind them? Like Nyx? Idk
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka WITH PLEASURE *cracks knuckles*
OOOH YARVOJ!!!!!! *throws him into the villain dungeon. Grabs bat*
DON’T MESS WITH THE TWINS!!!!!!! 😭
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
ZLATAAAAAAN!!!!! NOOO!! WHO DID THIS TO HIM!!! WHY?!?!?! PLZ TELL ME SO I CAN GO WREAK HAVOC ON THEM!! *yeets Zlatan into the protection squad and hugs him gently*
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon GASP NOOOO ALWIN!! The scars and shackle mark MAKE ME 😫😖 UGH!!!
But I do that to y’all with pax and November soooo…
ALSO UR DESCRIPTION OF HIS PANTS…
do y’all mind if I make that the kind of pants Paxton wears, (except a bit thicker cuz he needs it for warmer weather) ALSO yall just th…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
And lastly, (for now)
William. Brown blonde hair and green eyes, he is tall and broad shouldered. And serious, very serious. Although, among friends he will open up more and maybe even laugh. It’s not that he’s stoic per se, just that he’s… William. Very loyal and protective of those he loves, it’s b…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Next! (And sorry, I didn’t tag in the last two.)
Yes! Viktor is staying, and I also want to add…
Alwin. Has black hair that is cut fairly short, a rough ivory complexion, and thoughtful dark blue eyes. He is somewhat tall, but thin from lack of nourishment as much as from genetics.
Quiet but driven, h…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AHHH I LOVE THE EAGLE!!!
and of course I ALWAYS LOVE VIKTOR!!! Totally have the eagle!!!!!!
also….I kinda have some ideas for can meet who but again it’s also up to what y’all think/want
but I was kinda thinking it would be cool if Grimm met the twins. Nyx would know them, but I just think…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka IKR SHE TOLD ME ABOUT NATHAN AND I WAS LIKE 😭 😭 😭 BRUH AND I DON’T KNOW WHAT ALL THEY DO…BUT I AM SURE IT IS TERRIBLE!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AHHH I LOVE HIM!!!! So Viktor is staying??
also I think maybe the castle belongs to no one and we can add our own antagonists and villains and such. Just whatever 😂
Also YESSS PAXTON HAS MY HEART!!!! And Luna went so easily I was so pleased!! Hopefully it keeps going that way!!
Hmm I would like to start meeting some…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Okay, so I’ll try to introduce Reúven (Fritz) first…
Reúven. A laugh dances in his hazel eyes, but the set of his chin is determined. He has the soft calloused hands of a shepherd and the fleet feet of one. Which is a blessing, because he has given those feet to his lame father. What started in fe…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ahhhhh, I love them all. (But Paxton just about tore me up, the poor wee darling. Do you need someone to find him?) And LUNA!!!!!!!!
Yeah, she’s made her own special place in my heart. XD
And she’s really making me want to add in Winnifrith.
So, I think Alyona is not here this time, and Viktor and Reúven are on one of their…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka
YALL WARNING- this….wrote itself again….yall Luna is just…actually coming along and I was worrying about her!! OK I LUV HER 🤩 but it’s long XD
LunaThe sun beamed through the paneless windows, blowing in a steady stream of heat and fresh air. Luna breathed it in, feeling the breeze on her cheeks.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Heyo! Ya on? Just wondering if Viktor and Alyona are gonna stay in the castle! Along with Ocran. Ik u mentioned adding in was it Alwin? So would u need to take them out to do that?
also for now I’m just gonna tag @freedomwriter76 @koshka and Elishavet instead of everybody lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
oh. My. Gosh!!!
LEON AND RIKER ACTING LIKE FAMILY TOGETHER…LIKE BROTHERS….
MY. MY HEART….Cannot take…this….cuteness….
UNCLE LEON?!?!
AND THE END WITH THE….THE TEASING AND OH MY GOSH I AM SO HAPPY AND IN LOVE AND ESPECIALLY WITH HOW MUCH THEY’VE CHANGED FOR THE BETTER UGH!!!
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ET replied to the topic Did any book influence your current WIP? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@ mineralizedwriting
I have read about the first half of the Silmarillion, and then had to stop to read books for school. I plan on reading it all through to the end soon.
I do really like the Last Battle after, well, the last battle happens. One phrase I remember always is: “Further up and further in.” It’s a little sad about Susan…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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