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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@koshka @freed_and_redeemed so total I’ve got a little over 700 words. I’ve written in two scenes (started two scenes basically lol)
I know the scene I kinda wanna write next buuuuut I’m struggling to start it (starting is always the hardest part for me….and then going until it’s finished ROFL) But alsoooo it’s another November and Riven scene…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I gotta work out exactly how Erich got into the US Army tbh😂🫣 I’m thinking it could’ve been a part of the offer for giving him a shorter sentence or something, but I gotta put more research into it
Or he just joined the Army after he had his sentence.
idk exactly yet. 😅 if I have to change things a bit I…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@koshka it’s going good! I’m happy to be writing again (:
So far I’ve got over 300 words rn gonna try to write a few more
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
sooo is anyone on rn?? XD @loopylin @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@koshka ooooh that’s a great story. You said it’s from your sister’s book?
that kind of tale is always fun.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Interesting POV switch. A new technique I tried out for telling long stories rather then having a ton of first-person dialogue. Let me know what y’all think.
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 9th
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Thank you! I tried the Get in Touch page a week or two ago, but I haven’t heard back.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @anyone-else
and Part 3 (and I might share more from what would be the next scene too, but this is the end of the exact scene I’ve been sharing)
A vaguely familiar masculine voice…not very familiar, but familiar regardless.
A blue-eyed, blonde-haired man in a US Army unifor…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @anyone-else
Part 2 of the scene I shared🤭 (and this still isn’t all of it…still working on it atm)
Franz’s gaze didn’t stray from Riker’s. “I thought you were dead…we all did.”
Riker’s back pressed against the wall.
He should never have left the Altmann home in a rush.
E…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@whalekeeper lol the rock one
noooo pikachu don’t do it
I wanna say my characters are not glowsticks, but then I realized that one of them is kind of a literal glowstick cause he has a few light-up scales on his body that are bright enough to shine through his clothes. And he has a traumatized life to match (although that wasn’t really my…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
I was just thinking about making pana cotta! Never tried to make it before, but I had it a few days ago and enjoyed it.
Although I might swap out the rosewater for orange or lavender.
You can totally do that. Just decide what flavor combo with the spices is best in your opinion.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
my loyal subjects, I beg pardon.
Tragedy has struck.
The dragon laptop ate LOS for breakfast! 😱
I was able to recover most of it, but alas I must be away to other duties.
No new sections until Monday. 😭
🐲
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
he was just messed up. Period.
Thankfully, he’s less messed up now.
He’s a very purpose driven person. Take away his purpose, and he’s got nothing left.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Just gotta say, I love Quincy and Leo. Their dynamic is precious.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Wow!! You did catch it!
That’s impressive.
that would be about the time. He had this almost horrifying relief that he hadn’t been killed, he didn’t know what on earth to do with Leon’s sacrifice and felt bound to help him in some sort of payment, but once Leon was on the road to recovery there was nothing left for him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
No prob!!
Rory
Rory watched in stunned silence as the woman raced about, Leo trailing her and trying to catch things she knocked over in her haste. She was rattling on about something, but Rory was having a hard time tracking. It wasn’t that he was unable to take in her words… he most certainly was, along with every object and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
I also liked the way Leon realizes he’s dying, and that he doesn’t have much time left to work here. The urgency that comes over his actions was real to me.
Oh yeah, I see that. There definitely is an urgency.
And then the whole “you’re crazy but I still kinda admire your attitude” thing was funny, but unfortunately real.
🤣 I like Albe…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Wow!!!
*sits there and reads with mouth open* I had no idea I did all that!!
BUT ACTUALLY
*clears throat and nods* of course of course… it’s all with the flows of literary design and technique. 😂
It’s actually really cool seeing you lay it out like that, because I had no idea I had done that.
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