Koshka

@linus-smallprint

 

Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱

 

I understand that though.

 

A World War II spy story!

Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.

 

 

@hybridlore

I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by…[Read more]

@koshka

Really?! Ah yay!!!

 

Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!

 

Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?

@ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @rae @theducktator @loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @savannah_grace2009

Okay, sorry for taking so long to get back to this. I have a google form here to figure out how to best organize this. Please fill this out, even if you are just planning on giving feedback.           …[Read more]

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

 

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

 

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

 

 

QUESTIONS!

 

 

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!

NEXT SECTION!

 

    Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…

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Oh well! here are some tags cause I must tell everyone! ^

@keilah-h

@rae

@ellette-giselle

@theducktator

@grcr

@linus-smallprint

@hybridlore

@raxforge

@whalekeeper

@loopylin

@arcticanimals

@esther-c

@jonas and

@liberty

@stephie

@savannah_grace2009

@highscribeofaetherium

@koshka

@power

@freed_and_redeemed and

@thearcaneaxiom !!!!!!!!

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

Ugh! I posted two hours ago, but KP ate it!

 

NEXT SECTION!

Extra long to make up for yesterday.

 

 It was several hours later that the sound of steps echoed in the hall outside. Julian and Leon stood as the door opened.

The guar…

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@keilah-h

I tend to lean towards global flood as well. That’s something I hadn’t considered regarding rock layers.

@grcr

My dad says that there are a lot of generations skipped in those genealogies, and that they only recorded the more important people, so that’s why he doesn’t think that they are a very accurate way to calculate the age of…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal @keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power @freed_and_redeemed @stephie @MineralizedWritings

My family went to a museum full of fossils today, which sparked a discussion…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

no section today.

Super busy.

Sorry!

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

NEXT SECTION!!!

 

Leon blew on his hands and rubbed them together. He stood up and went to his pack. Digging through it, he found his scarf. It was worn, and there were a few tears along the edge. He held it in both hands and though…

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@koshka

Sounds good!

 

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

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Leon and Julian enjoyed their time with Konner and his family, and the notice was almost forgotten in Julian’s pocket.

It was evening that they returned home. Fox had come back from the carpenters where he…

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@ellette-giselle

Okay, sure. Anyone is welcome to help with the feedback portion even if they don’t want to participate in the writing.

@grcr

Great!

@hybridlore

Okay!

@highscribeofaetherium

Of course you will. You didn’t have a choice!

@rae

Sounds good!

@koshka

An outline would be purely optional, and for anyone who does make one, i…[Read more]

@theducktator

If there’s enough interest, we could try to plan one for late May/early June.

@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

@whalekeeper @stephie @loopylin @grcr @keilah-h @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @anyone-i-forgot

Is anyone up for a call sometime soon? We could try for the 2…[Read more]

@jonas

This sounds like a cool idea. I don’t write very orthodox, so I won’t have an outline. (just character outlines). I’m also not sure if I’m sharing my current novels on line for marketing purposes. (They’ll be releasing this summer, starting with the first one later this month)

But I’d sure be willing to breathe down anyone’s neck who…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

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Two days later, Leon was walking home from visiting the Krügers in the late evening. He was nearly home when someone called out, “You there, what’s your business?”

Leon turned around and saw a young soldier lean…

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@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

I was gonna give people a chance to catch up while I busy myself shooting and poor characters and dumping them out of airplanes……. but I think I’ll post the next section now.

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

 

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 5th      
The Empire

We have continued to spread the word of God in the streets, in the square, and to those we meet. We are rising again, and the en…

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