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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 12 hours ago
What? XD Oh no. I’ll tweak that. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun.
Onnendel is not the traitor. It would be a great twist, but he’s too much of Aenwest’s cinnamon roll to have a negative arc..
Plus… Backstory. Lots of backstory….
They’ll talk more about that in the next two chapters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 12 hours ago
or you could gather the kids and play a game with them. I used to do that all the time when they were younger.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 12 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 12 hours ago
yeah, well have you tried talking with the women, or even sitting and listening to the adults talk?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 13 hours ago
wait what!!!!???
I keep re-reading this, but it reads as if they’re saying Onnendel is the traitor. He’s not, RIGHT?!?!?!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 13 hours ago
I just died.
hahahaha!!! That’s so, so good!
You should come down and visit ours! lololol.
The politics are way better and we’re pretty big too…. and we have an army. (I’m referring to the song…… haha!)
I don’t have anyone my age, but I take time to invest in the lives of the little girls…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 13 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested
The next chapter is up!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 13 hours ago
In Which Orcs Stink, and Dwogin Plays Hockey
Chapter 6
“Cowards and kettledrums!” Dwogin bellowed. His axe sprang into his hand and the stout warrior went charging into the first line of the ambushment. Orcs flew like flies over a hotly contested piece of garbage. I gagged.
In the chaos that ensued, I caught a glimpse of Onnendel and Tra…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 13 hours ago
nope, I have two brothers and 1 sister.
I honestly think that it’s not good to have that big of a congregation. We’re called to fellowship with the believers and uplift, encourage, and hold one another accountable. I find that hard to do when you don’t know the people in your church. *shrug* that’s just my opinion.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 13 hours ago
Good, I’m glad you understand what I mean.
oh I think we have about………… 100 kids and young adults and maybe 25 parents. (our family of 6 is the smallest family in the church. the average is about nine kids,)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 14 hours ago
YAY!!!!! I was literally just thinking about this!
Rory
Rory lowered his gaze. “You’ve seen me fight. I’m skilled. And that’s without a weapon. Give me a gun or a knife………” he shrugged. “They trained me well. I’m skilled and I’m dangerous. They want me to continue to fight for them, to train other to be like me…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 days, 14 hours ago
Ooooooo!!! CHILLS! I love it so much!!!! I sense a redemption story and those are my favorite!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 14 hours ago
yeah, my poor characters are about to all receive knee injuries…………………
Thank you for the prayers!
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
BTW how’s that drawing of Soldier going?
I wasn’t able to print the reference pictures until this morning. Currently, I’m thinking over posing.
My brother took the pictures and asked what it was. He had a good laugh over Soldier’s grin as he teleports bread lol. I’m gonna try to get him to read your fanfic, I think he’d like it a lot.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 days, 15 hours ago
@ellette-giselle Here you go.
@keilah-h @highcribeofaethum
Fourth story!
Brutus
I am a hideous monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged and had purpose. That I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in. I had to prove to him…[Read more] -
Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 16 hours ago
Okay!
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 16 hours ago
Oh NO!!! I knew someone would be slipping with all this snow and ice…but I had no idea it would you be!!!
I’m definitely praying for you! Get better soon!!!!
Although…in one way this is a good thing…since you’ll be able to include my story…but I’m totally not saying that was a good reason for you slipping.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 days, 16 hours ago
*excited clapping*
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 days, 16 hours ago
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