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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Just opened this thread to read this:
“Well… I respect it because it’s a god, but I don’t have to like it. And it tries not to like me either because that would go against its morals. It doesn’t just talk, it preaches.”
😂 I have no words. Just goofy, suppressed laughter noises. XD Qhivzim sounds like my sister’s cat if they only l…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I am still sorely tempted to have my quiet guy haul off on someone. This is bad. His character development is at stake.
Viktor
“Any good? At science?” Viktor lifted one shoulder in a half shrug. “Ja, I guess so. I can remember things, I just…”
The pencil he had pulled back out waved aimlessly about as he searched for…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper Ehhhhh. Needlessss… *shudder* 😉 I hope it well well!
Wow. I just wrote an RP and it got completely out of hand. I haven’t had Viktor yelling at anyone in a while, but I just found a trigger. XD It’s a bit excessive for the moment though, so I’ll edit to what I was originally intending before I send it in.
His poor…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
…. and then he got pushed off a building.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
PART 2
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
The question is…. is that good or bad? 🤣
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
perfect!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
No problem.
I’m guessing that means you just read the chapters? Or did you not get to it yet?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
And that is a question I had to scroll pretty far back to answer.
Do we wait for Hugo, @whakekeeper ?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
CHAPTERs 14-15!!!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
I know! Poor guy!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 10 months, 4 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 4 weeks ago
AHa! That works… I lost my place too…
Now let’s see if I can get back into my charrie’s head.
Viktor
Lab partners. Right.
Viktor shuffled his notes into his textbook as slowly as he could, making sure each page was smooth and even. His old habit to duck his head out of friendships cut again. A quick glance at Lois didn’t help.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
Theme song for Jonathan in current stage of arc and somewhat forward.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Aw, Lucille… I like Lucille.
I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?
I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it have an important part in the plot/worldbuilding?
Those other kids are bullies. 😠 The struggle of wills in the fight was really good though. I liked how you focus on her not throwi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
Oh, I forgot that chapter ended there. 🙃
Yeah, they’ve turned in plenty of people. For Jonathan’s parents it was more Agent retaliation. We’re here to pick up the kid. You don’t have the kid? Fine, you pay for it. That sort of thing.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 4 weeks ago
what was sweet?
No, the gang was not involved in that one. They were killed because they hid Jonathan.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 4 weeks ago
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