Koshka

@hybridlore

I know, it’s been acting odd.

If you reload it it should look better.

Should be posting two more chapters in just a second.

@grcr

Sounds good! Tag me whenever you’re ready.

@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @loopylin

“He gave the kids who had spoken to Viktor a cold look”

I want to see a book where when a character does that it actually makes ice start growing on the other person. Just something that comes to me when I see that phrase.

@grcr

How do you feel about another character, or you want a break?

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TWO NEW CHAPTERS!!

@hybridlore

I know. It was so cute!!

My poor boys! They are in a sure fix.

@hybridlore

Yes, that was me. I don’t exactly want him to die…I just have a feeling that he might.

Poor 618. And 621. That government! 😡

Hear, hear.

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TWO NEW CHAPTERS!!

@whalekeeper
Okay awesome! That is not really a feeling I want you to have. XD

@hybridlore

Yay! I’m glad you liked it! Yep, Jonathan and Michael are back!

@whalekeeper

I’m good with that! It’s a fun group of expected differences and surprising similarities.

@loopylin That would be interesting. 😂 I have a feeling she fights rough.

I guess I should answer Hugo’s question, lol.

Viktor

“Physical education. All the high school kids will be there.” Hugo said it lightly, but there was a pause at the…[Read more]

@liberty

lol. Well good.

@ellette-giselle

Yes… I did…. (I have an aspiring pilot of a brother with pilot friends, so yes. XD) but I also invented this plane so I have a little leeway.

Ah, right! I forgot about that. Neat!

why, did something stand out that seemed incorrect?

Nope, it’s actually the opposite. I was so impressed by how realistic it all sounded.

@liberty

Ooo yay! So glad!

Yes… I did…. (I have an aspiring pilot of a brother with pilot friends, so yes. XD) but I also invented this plane so I have a little leeway.

why, did something stand out that seemed incorrect?

@ellette-giselle

I went through all six chapters! I’m thoroughly enjoying the story! I’m excited to see Cassion appear.

By the way, how much research did you do for all the jet tech stuff? Did you actually look into all those terms they talked about?  Especially Jason’s engineering talk…

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TWO MORE NEW CHAPTERS. FOUR IN TOTAL TODAY.

And goodnight.

@theducktator
I’m glad you’re happy with Evan’s board. How is Evan the duck btw?

Sounds good! I’ll be looking forward to sunday comments!

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TWO NEW CHAPTERS. Possibly more later.

@theshadow

I’m not an expert on this, but would say that as long as the song itself does not glorify sin, it probably falls in with eating meat sacrificed to idols. Paul teaches that one person may be able to eat it with the understanding that God made all things and the food is just food and can be eaten to glorify God instead, but another…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thank you very much!

That was really helpful about the description thing. I think that makes more sense. I wonder too if I over-did the “buzz” words in dystopian literature because I was trying to cut down on description. XD I’ll totally look at that.

Hmmm, that’s interesting what you are saying aboyt the Christianity thing.…[Read more]