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whaley replied to the topic My Book Feels Too Big (Also heeeey!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
You’ve got this!! Push forward and straighten out all those plot tangles! And if you get burnt out, take a break. I believe in you. :p
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Jasper
“To find rivals.” Jasper gazed at Wilhelm for an extended moment. Something told him this kid was more useful than the rest of the new rabble. Maybe it was instinct. Or just wishful thinking. He tapped an empty chair, next to where he stood. “You must have arrived late. Dessert’s still on the table, if you want it.”
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Hear, hear!
Wilhelm
Firstborn. That probably meant he had birthright privileges. Such trivial matters could not touch the gulf of rank between them, either widening or narrowing it. Wilhelm nodded politely but shrugged mentally.
At least “High Commander” sounded like an active role, unlike the lazybones titles some people used.…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Wilhelm, my boy, you got this. You’re tough. You’re confident. NOT a cur.
Jasper (the prince in blue)
“Jasper, son of the High Commandant himself. Firstborn.”
Thunder above, did Jasper love to say those words to someone for the first time.
People’s faces shifted – from curiosity, to eventual realization and respect.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
REMINGTON. NOOOO. XD
Wilhelm
For a moment, he was too overcome with horror to do anything more than resist Remington’s barbaric friendliness. If Wilhelm had been a cat, his tail would have dwarfed all former levels of panic, and his claws would be making inroads into the marble floor.
“Nein, nein, nein.” He hissed under his…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Hehehehehe 😁 Poor Wilhelm. So much information in so little time.
Remington
Remington lit up. Across the room stood a group of richly attired young noblemen. They were all laughing very hard about something – it didn’t matter what. They looked perfect.
“See those guys?” Remington hissed in Wilhelm’s ear. “They’re probably ta…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
*helpless dolphin noises* I love this.
Wilhelm
Remington. Lacreux. Lacough. Lacoo. Just Remington, Remington, Remington. Wilhelm nodded vaguely.
“Don’t worry.” Remington went on, beaming benevolence. “Just because you don’t know what a soufflé is, doesn’t mean you won’t be accepted by high society.”
A pause. Wilhelm trapped an…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Lolll. Very smooth, Marcel.
If Reúven hadn’t been already thinking in a serious line of thought, he’d probably have reacted much the same way. Just, not so unobtrusively. XD Marcel is awesome.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Popping in because this is fun to watch
Marcel
Marcel rubbed his elbow where he had fallen, grinning like a cheshire cat and standing on the game sidelines. He caught a few lines of an interesting conversation. A girl, holding a notebook and pencil lile some kind of reporter, was talking to a student.
The girl…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Was this boy a lunatic? Wilhelm tried to draw his dagger
XD That’s the perfect reaction
This character is sort of shallow but really wants to help out new students, so he’s very useful when we need him
Remington
“I am Remington LaCreux. You may call me Remington. Just Remington.” The young man’s expression softened. Poor Wilhe…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Thanks. 😁
Wilhelm
Was this boy a lunatic? Wilhelm tried to draw his dagger, deeply regretting that his more impressive weapons were in his room, but the stranger kept dragging him on too quickly for Wilhelm to coordinate his own movements. That might have been for the best, he remembered after a minute. Knifes usually escalated…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Ooo.
Reúven
His mouth went dry. He forced himself not to break eye contact, even though it meant she probably saw the flash of anger he tried so hard to repress. His smile was painfully thin.
“No.” Home was his safe place, guarded as it was by the man in the wheelchair. Anywhere else was a no man’s land of possibility. That was why…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
intense suavety
That’s a pretty good choice of words, I must say
Remington
Remington brandished his free arm in the air, his excessively laced sleeve waving about. His jacket, also laced, was cobweb gray, and helped him blend in when he needed to. It was also fashionable. That, the holy aim of all clothing, had no choice but to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Remington sounds fun. I am probably too tired to be doing this but here goes lol.
Wilhelm
“I…” He swallowed back whatever words were forming on his tongue. The stranger was an impressive figure, cheerful and domineering. His eyes almost glowed in their intense suavety. Wilhelm squared his shoulders. “Then what should I say?…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Tis ok! Life can be like that sometimes.
Reúven
“Safety procedures? Like drills?” He paused. “There have been some fire drills, I think.”
He almost went on to say that he always assumed those fell on days he was absent, but that was far too much information. It was always better to keep things simple. He kept the rest of his…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
For context, this character is basically this roleplay’s version of an NPC. That’s not the right word, but I can’t be bothered to think of a better one. 😛 He’s part of the world itself and isn’t from any of my stories.
Remington
It was a fine night for a student to explore the school grounds by himself – which was exactly w…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy thought for a moment. She jumped down from the crow’s back.
Runt’s nest was literally poorer than the other nest from before; there weren’t any jewelry or household items lodged in the branches. But there were some pieces of ribbon, twine, and something that looked suspiciously like long strands of hair.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Ah! Yes, poor thing.
I can bring him into the food area if I need to. I think he’s very lost at the moment.
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m posting here to knock this back up to the top of the forum. It’s been little while, but I think we have a good setup if anyone feels like continuing the story. 🙃
Sorry to leave Wilhelm hanging! This must be remedied
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic My Book Feels Too Big (Also heeeey!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Elishavet- yup! It’s the first destined book! And it’s just like the first draft I’ve ever truly “finished” like there are still scenes needing to be added and stuff, but it’s mostly cohesive
Yayyyyyyy! *happy dances* 🎉 🎵 This is so exciting. I’ve wanted these books written ever since you shared their mood oards. XD
If you need br…[Read more]
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