Koshka

@hybridlore

😊 *Chucks the whole bag of glitter into your cup, spilling it everywhere*

@hybridlore

Glitter in our tea?! Bleh! 😝

It’s okay, it’s edible glitter!! ✨ (Such things exist)

@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Thank you all for trying to help with my project! When I asked the question, I was still trying to verbalize what kind of ‘in-between genre’ this is, and I think I know what to aim for now. All the appreciation to you! *Throws confetti in your faces* *Throws glitter into your tea*

@savannah_grace2009

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@esther-c

Don’t get your hopes up girl! Ellette kills approximately every character who ever existed 🤣🤣

@esther-c

Do you really want to know?

@esther-c

I’m glad some of what I said was helpful! I’m excited to see what you end up doing in your story.

@keilah-h

He’s still a character of Wond, but otherwise he’s unrelated to my other stories.

@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m about to go edit the short story the scene is in, so this will be very helpful.

@savannah_grace2009

Sure thing! I may not be able to get it to right away…at least all of it, but I’m willing to help you!

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh I love desert settings! Too bad Liv doesn’t feel the same way – and too bad she is so exhausted, for that matter. Is this sister older or younger than her?

@rae

I don’t think it’s too repetitive, except for this bit at the beginning:

Baron knocked and entered his Father’s quarters. He knelt. “You sent for me, Fat…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h

So…I just wrote this scene and i was wondering if it’s a little weird that I call the guy ‘Father’ all the time instead of giving him a real name. He isn’t a priest and he isn’t even Baron’s biological father. The reason I don’t give him a real name is that Baron doesn’t know what his real name is, he…[Read more]

@theshadow

Lol, we’re talking about charries as if they’re children or siblings now

How do you deal with him? He seems a little tough.

We make fun of each other. There have been times I’m in a conversation with other people and we’re talking about annoying things, and I’ll go like “You hear that Silvanis? That sounds just like you!”. He usually…[Read more]

@keilah-h

by the way you did finish the fic right?

Oh dear, I forgot to tell you with CWW and going back to school, sorry!

I really really liked the ending! It was so sweet. My only criticism would be I kinda didn’t understand fully what was going on before that point, Otherwise, it was great!

@koshka

That is beautifully chilling. *applause*

ugh, idk what to rp. Last time Silvanis and I talked, he was criticizing my out-loud reading skills and i told him to stop talking.

@Koshka

AHHH!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

I can’t wait for more!!!