Koshka

@linus-smallprint

Well, thank you for venturing into new grounds! This does help freshen up this story from the others.

Thanks! That’s the goal!

linus-smallprint

All four gospels and Acts in one night? Wow. These guys love to read.

First off, that’s not THAT MUCH.

secondly, they started in the morning and went on through the night to the next morning.

thirdly, yes, they love to study.

Why do I have a feeling someone from Leon and Julian’s group is going to end up in these g…

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@raxforge

Here ya go

Marcel

Marcel meandered through the morning rush, stuffing his satchel shut and tucking his wings in for less drag.

Since yesterday, he had kept an eye out for the youngest students. The low staff wasn’t helping anything, and there was no way a kid was going to be kidnapped again.

In a matter of hours, the kindergarteners…[Read more]

@raxforge

well good!!

XD

@ellette-giselle

lol, I think I’m going to keep him on the main floor to try creep out as many people as possible 😁

@elishavet-pidyon

Yes, he is the protagonist.

Thank you for your tips!

I use Bryce as Guy’s younger brother.

Guy and Bryce originally came from a different story that I had, and that’s where I fell in love with Bryce, but that story sort of to the shelf of books that would never be written. I was sad about that since I loved the brother…[Read more]

@raxforge

In the basement sorting nails and bolts with Leo.

….. I don’t know. *shrug*

@ellette-giselle

…Where is Rory?

@raxforge

Oh. My. Goodness.

Keep that creep away from my Rory or I swear the kid’s gonna die of fright! 😂😂😂

He’s traumatized enough already.

@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator

It is being attempted. *cracks knuckles*

@liberty

Ah, your moodbard is beautiful! You did a fantastic job! I’m curious about this fellow. Is he a protagonist?

Whatever tips I have may be irrelevant since I can see them in your work already. Basically, look for coordinating colors and moods between pictures, and play with a style until you feel like it fits the character. Also, choose…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

The day passed, and the five young men explored the town. Everyone seemed to be very busy, and no one was interested in talking with them. So, the five decided to scout out the town and see what it was like. As Roland had said, the town wa…

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New charrie!!!

Mateo

Tall and cover in black, the figure wore a black sombrero type hat and ominously played a white guitar. His melody could send chills up the bravest of heart. He hung his head low, making it so that no one could see his face. He walked into the school grounds, the essence of evil hanging around him.

Who wants to talk…[Read more]

@koshka @loopylin

Rax and Ben

Rax didn’t like Syph’s answer and wanted to make amends, “I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”

@ellette-giselle I know, Rax is weird

@whalekeeper

lol.

I was told the writing style wasn’t great either.

Have you read the original Rapunzel? Like, the 100 page narrative? Old, old, old.

Oh, and Tangled is better than the original tale. I feel like that doesn’t count, because the fairy tales are so short and not-detailed by nature.

@ellette-giselle

Never read the HTYD books because someone told me not to and just stick with the movies.

Haha, I know why. Some of the differences are night and day. Toothless is tiny and green, Fishlegs is thin… Makes me laugh to even think about it.

Oh, War Horse reminds me of another one! 101 Dalmatians is better than the book in some ways.…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

You have a BRYCE????!!! Oh my gosh! I absolutely adore that name because of one of my characters! I read Susan’s fan fiction story after the train accident. It was really good.

@keilah-h

Ha, your drawing illustrated the confrontation quite well. :] I like the subtle coloring for Sniper’s tail and legs.

@liberty

Just emailed you about this!!!!!
IT”S SO GOOD!