Koshka

@whalekeeper

Don’t have them there just for the sake of stupidity. Don’t make it look like all you want its stupidness and so you’re throwing in characters with the roll of being stupid.

They have to have a point and a reason.

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon
Hugo
“Hi.” Hugo welcomed Lois in a friendly tone. “The outfit judgement from younger kids is real.”
A second later, a bell rang. It wasn’t the normal school bell, but a large one inside a grandfather clock in the library common room. The cartoon rabbit twisted from surprise, and his ears trembled.
“Oh gosh, I’ve…[Read more]

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

Having the boys in the same first class sounds like a plan to me. @whalekeeper what do you think?

I will see to it then. *Folds hands masterfully* Shall place them in a separate class from the one already starting, since I don’t want to deal with three of my POVs in one place.

I’m really annoyed for having taken so long, and I have to warn you guys that I might take days to respond. Lore drop for my life – I have a chronic illness now? *Rolls eyes* Seriously? That’s a bit of a distraction.

But let’s see if we can plop multiple characters into new locations while I’m at it.

@linus-smallprint

I can totally see Iskyagus with abnormally featured henchmen, like animalistic things with extra limbs/beaks/heads or something. You could play into the creepy aspects of this, so they show off the evil side of magic, and contrast Iskyagus’ more eye-pleasing design.

@ellette-giselle

As long as they aren’t stupid. They can be f…

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@rae

YAY!!!!!

Oh man!! That really got to me!!!

I am someone who loves large chunks of scripture in stories, but if it feels too long maybe break it up a little and have shorter passages with some “…” filling the sections that don’t directly pertain to the story.

YES! It felt very legit!

One of my favorite!!

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve never seen that movie. Just heard of it. And I like the song “Speechless” but other than that I know nothing of it besides it taking place in Arabia.  lololol.

@liberty

But that IS how I feel!!!!

@raxforge @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @whalekeeper @theducktator

It feels like forever since I posted a story on here, but here is story #11! This is my favorite one of the entire Baron Chronicles, and it brought tears to my eyes. I hope you enjoy it too:)

 
Though your sins be as Scarlet…
Sunlight filtered through the pale…[Read more]

@keilah-h

😂 I think he’ll think it’s funny. And he might even be pleased that something picked a name like his for a book character…even if they’re a bad guy…

@hybridlore

I already attempted to do so and got out-debated. She took fake-Alec. 😖

Wait, what does that mean? Who’s fake-Alec?

You don’t care about Leon?

I do! I do! Just…maybe I like Rolf better??🫣

@ellette-giselle

I feel like you should be like this:

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I feel like you should be like this:

@ellette-giselle

Wow. Yup. Has some similarities to Papa.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For anyone who is interested…..

Hassan (center) and two of the other slave traders.

(and yes, they are in their native country in this picture)

@linus-smallprint

Hello, nice to see you around.

Girls are weird.

*indignant gasp* how dare you!

😂

For some reason I started to imagine Hassan as Middle Eastern when you mentioned his name. Probably wearing a turban of sorts.

Well that is exactly how you should picture him! Bravo! 👏🏻

(if you look back at the story moodboard you may catch a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

No idea who those fellas are you just mentioned, but go for it! As long as they aren’t stupid. They can be funny and even idiots, but they need to have a clear roll. A reason for why their leader hasn’t killed them off.

Have you seen The Defense of New Haven?

If not, you must watch it! It’s really good. It’s a Christian home…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Hmm. I guess we’ll have to see.

@hybridlore

Fine then!!

*pulls out dagger, grabs Alec, and holds blade to his throat.* BACK OFF!!

yeah, we’ll have to see what happens.

@hybridlore

Um, I’m threatening Alec and his world totally has guns.

So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?

IN ONE TOWN!

The so they shut down the main market that reached the inland. This would still be going on in coastal towns, but that town reached a bigger part of the Empire and also had a…[Read more]

@hybridlore

*whips around with a hand on my gun*

I wouldn’t.

@keilah-h

I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious.

Yes…. but the only time they were seen was in Clonabay, and i mentioned the amount of different cultures that are all mixed in there. No one is really noticing anything in that city. Ya know? Plus, Leon and Rolf are in such a bad state that the people of the Empire…[Read more]