Koshka

@godlyfantasy12

Ooooo!!! I love this section!!!

Ok. Callan is a knave, and that was creepy, but well done. This description of him made me laugh:

Callan’s voice sounded like something that crawled out of a swamp.

And November facing someone he fears to protect Ara was AMAZING. And her Uncle is fantastic. Being a PK myself, I loved his c…[Read more]

@theducktator

100%

Go look at Alcatraz if anyone disagrees with that statement,

@hybridlore

Lolol. you seemed pretty convinced…… 😂

Well, the overseers are cruel and they picked Ian as their target. They want him to live in the absolute terror that he could slip up any moment and that would be the end. It’s a terror that drives him crazy. He already had that rebellious spark and a sort of fire about him to begin with,…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

Rory let out a slow breath. He even gave Leo a slight smile as they road up the elevator. He was still turning the older boy’s words over in his mind. It didn’t make much sense. After all, they said that fear was weakness and that’s why they were punishing him and the others. Rory chewed on his lip and then quickly stopped,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

*Sniff*

That’s beautiful. I love how realistic his theme is. I wish more books addressed the need to love God first. Knowing God is the deepest, innate need of us humans. But it’s too easy to see that on paper and not draw it out in real life.

What really crushes me about the situation he’s in right now, is that when he sees…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ok. You about made me cry.

That is so sad. I can see November’s motives so clearly that it’s painful, because it’s just… So true, and yet so, so wrong. Riven is using the truth to tell a lie. And poor, sweet November is caught in the middle. Riven using affection to manipulate November breaks my reader-heart.

I could pound…[Read more]

@loopylin @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @the _lost-journal

thx.

@potato-reporter

Wait you made your pfp?! It is soooo cute and creative!!!! <3

thx

Credit for the idea of ice cream goes to @raxforge I originally found a reference picture of just four chibi heads on top of each other, and Andrew was talking about cherries so I…[Read more]

@liberty

Ooo! No I haven’t!!

@ellette-giselle

Actually, that scene with Leon was inspired by a true account I read! Wonder if it’s the same one?

Well, the one that touched me was in a movie. Maybe you’ve heard of it? “The War to End all Wars”? It’s a WW2 film.

@linus-smallprint

Think so?

I mostly write fiction so it would be interesting.

Maybe if I did a fiction-like sort of retelling… like how Little Women is Alcott’s biography but with a few fiction twists. That might make it easier to write.

@linus-smallprint

Lololol. We must remember that I wrote that when I was much younger and wasn’t fully sure where I stood… 😂

Okay then. If that works then that’s great!

The fire thing was actually one of my favorite memories!! I want to write a book about it sometime. (I’d like to write about the whole experience of having church during…[Read more]

@koshka

Okay!

“I met a knight once. He got it by writing some three hundred line long poem about something or other. Thinnest, most absent minded man I ever saw.”

I. Just. Died.

Rory

Rory’s brow furrowed and a frightened look came to his eyes. “I…” he swallowed and licked his lips. “I think we have knights. We call them Agents… the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!! He’s back!!

That would definitely work better, giving Julian some time to come to terms with his grief.

Perfect. I made the switch this morning actually.

Why is the first thing that comes to mind the scene from The Voyage of the Dawn Treader movie?

ya know…. that works. I think I had a scene from my own mind in my…[Read more]

@liberty

*grin* Yup. That never works for an excuse!

Yup. lololol.

Actually, that scene with Leon was inspired by a true account I read! Wonder if it’s the same one?

@ellette-giselle

“Lord, all that’s down there is trouble. Nothing good happens out here after dark. I’m going home.”

*grin* Yup. That never works for an excuse!

Go now, and sin no more,

Perfect!

The whip tore into his back again and Leon felt himself jerk with the force of the blow. Oh God, forgive them!

Oh. WOW. I love this scene! Not because…[Read more]

@koshka

ball’s in your court ma’am. i have no idea where we’re going.

Rory

Rory walked beside Leo, trying to force the limp from his steps. His mind was slowly working over what Leo had said, and he risked a glance at the older boy. “Leo… what’s knighted?”

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!! I love that meme so much!

@koshka

Ooops! 😂

Wow, I have no idea what was even going on. I think Leo and Rory were having “brother time” 😄

Rory

Rory looked up quickly. “I’ll come with you right now!” He scrambled up. “That is, I’ll come with you now… if you would like me to… if your orders are to do so… sir… Leo.”

He shifted from one foot to the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lol!

*Viktor sees it*

What? I don’t… Oh. Oh! That’s funny. *Laughs so hard it sounds like a duck*

@loopylin

Chase

Soda. That was the same stuff that Marcel had gotten him at that shop. Chase himself had gotten some for Sef. He kind of liked soda.

He nodded.

sorry, it’s short