Koshka

@ellette-giselle

*squealing with excitement* I can’t wait to hear about it!

@liberty

Something I haven’t mentioned. I’m doing it between any possible sequel to CR.

@ellette-giselle

Wait…is this the second book in the CR series? Or a new story you haven’t told me about?

@liberty

I have a book I’m about to start writing once I wrap up CR, and I think you’re gonna go head over heals for the MC. Or the MC’s best friend. One of the two. It’s going to be a you sort of book. 😂

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know. It didn’t really stand out to me, but then from your notes I knew it was going to happen.

Whaley did make a strong point.

I think you could go either way.

Honestly, maybe a mix is best.

Either your original way with a little more listening, or Whaley’s way with a little more anger.

@theducktator @whalekeeper

Mateo

Mateo looked at the kid, he said in a threatening voice, “Don’t make that mistake again.” He then turned to little fellow and said in his ‘light-hearted’ voice, “Where too, Pequeño?”

@linus-smallprint

yeah, the girl slaves were in the house.

Okay…. maybe. That’s a big gap between the twins tho. I may change it. I have a new character in his 20s coming in.

@rae

I’m a little swamped, but tag me and I’ll try to join at some point. 😊

@rae

I like it! I think the part in the field is the only thing I would fix honestly. But that’s your choice.

Like I said, it’s a delayed hit.

I’ll probably cry tonight. 😂

@koshka

Imperial soldiers are young.

I only have two other teens.

And also, nice drawing! I now understand. XD I thought she was a lot less humanoid.

@linus-smallprint

So when Alan joins The Faithful, and suddenly his behaviour changes (such as his reasons to fight), she is disturbed by this. To her, this kind of looks like he is giving up his independent thinking to some big jerk who thinks he has a right to do whatever he wants with the world.

Ah, there we go! That makes sense. Instead of her…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I like how that article covers previous names for the condition. That’s cool. 🙃

@rae

I was just thinking about art challenges today. I might not do all of them. 😆 But I’d try my best whenever there’s free time.

@mineralizedwritings

np!

Will do

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @grcr @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @anyone-else

So I just got an idea. Recently I’ve been enjoying doing some art challenges to help me grow in some weak points in my art, and was wondering if we could do an art challenge together each week or two. Anyone interesting?

If people are, I’ll create a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was slightly sad that I didn’t make much effect (though what was I expecting when the writing for this final story was sub-par). i was hoping that the story would hit even if the writing didn’t, but I’m quite content after reading your last comment.

I will rewrite this story later, and then I hope it hits harder.

For now, I’m…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

you are insufferable.

Why thank you!

CALLED IT!!

As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!

*sheepish grin* I guess you know how to write a “Liberty’s favorite character” now.

@liberty

Liberty…..

you are insufferable.

😂

NOTHING about Marius and the prince?

 

Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.

CALLED IT!!

As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!

@koshka

Uh, 21 is still between 16-30