Koshka

Sounds good! I vote A 🙂

@hybridlore

Haha! You typed it a lot during TVON

@hybridlore

Yay!! I’m glad I caught you by surprise at least. 😂

It took about a month honestly. I learned web design so I could do it. I was motivated.

@hybridlore

I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist.

Did you see it coming?!?!

Linus will say he did. 100% 😂

Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.

Ya don’t say?……………

😂

Aw thank you!!!! I’m so glad! What do you think??!

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The next Sabbath, Hans did not return, but Julian was pleased to see Marius slip in and sit down. With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens. Marius leaned over and whispered something to his companion who nodded. Ju…

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@ellette-giselle

*squealing with excitement* I can’t wait to hear about it!

@liberty

Something I haven’t mentioned. I’m doing it between any possible sequel to CR.

@ellette-giselle

Wait…is this the second book in the CR series? Or a new story you haven’t told me about?

@liberty

I have a book I’m about to start writing once I wrap up CR, and I think you’re gonna go head over heals for the MC. Or the MC’s best friend. One of the two. It’s going to be a you sort of book. 😂

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know. It didn’t really stand out to me, but then from your notes I knew it was going to happen.

Whaley did make a strong point.

I think you could go either way.

Honestly, maybe a mix is best.

Either your original way with a little more listening, or Whaley’s way with a little more anger.

@theducktator @whalekeeper

Mateo

Mateo looked at the kid, he said in a threatening voice, “Don’t make that mistake again.” He then turned to little fellow and said in his ‘light-hearted’ voice, “Where too, Pequeño?”

@linus-smallprint

yeah, the girl slaves were in the house.

Okay…. maybe. That’s a big gap between the twins tho. I may change it. I have a new character in his 20s coming in.

@rae

I’m a little swamped, but tag me and I’ll try to join at some point. 😊

@rae

I like it! I think the part in the field is the only thing I would fix honestly. But that’s your choice.

Like I said, it’s a delayed hit.

I’ll probably cry tonight. 😂

@koshka

Imperial soldiers are young.

I only have two other teens.

And also, nice drawing! I now understand. XD I thought she was a lot less humanoid.

@linus-smallprint

So when Alan joins The Faithful, and suddenly his behaviour changes (such as his reasons to fight), she is disturbed by this. To her, this kind of looks like he is giving up his independent thinking to some big jerk who thinks he has a right to do whatever he wants with the world.

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@ellette-giselle

I like how that article covers previous names for the condition. That’s cool. 🙃

@rae

I was just thinking about art challenges today. I might not do all of them. 😆 But I’d try my best whenever there’s free time.