Koshka

@keilah-h

You are dead on with all of those!

@elishavet-pidyon

You are right on most of those. He is curious, loves to whittle, is a wanderer, and can fight well.

What did you mean by a “messanger/somehow connected to the clerical/Levitical circle”?

Oh yes, he is a strategist. (Hence, he loves chess)

Yes! He is more of a found family…[Read more]

@theducktator

Vyette, what does a normal morning look like for you? Does your family allow you to make important decisions yet?

Barnes, what is your most embarrassing moment?

[Pauses, as if deciding to skip over a few things]

“I get angry when I’m embarrassed, and I was furious when my parents put me in the school district pageant. They wanted…[Read more]

@r-m-archer

Oh, that’s a great article! Thank you for sharing. It gave me several ideas. (As did your article on false religions, which I read right after that one.)

Also, it’s so good to see you around here again!

@whalekeeper

Well, everyone made theirs much less complicated than what I was thinking, so I’m glad I waited. lol. I think I basically agree with what the others have said. I do like a first person narrative, if it’s well done and really used to contribute to the texture of the story.

I also think that not every style that’s technically “wordy”…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Still haven’t got proof that she’s alive.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Y’all are terrible. 🤣

@liberty

• He’s a rolling stone/without roots/drifter.
• He’s curious about things.
• He likes to work with wood/whittle.
• He’s a messenger, or somehow connected to the clerical/Levitical circle.
• He’s either a strategist, or stuck in a tight situation.
• Despite his youth and friendly demeanor, he can fight like a cat.
• He’s more of the…

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I’m gonna do Rax, but this is going to be him after the events that happen in story that I’m writing.

1. What is your full name?

“Lord Rax Forge.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

Rax grins, almost chuckling to himself, “Well, I am the Pyromancer. The wielder of fire.”

3. What is your body language…

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@ellette-giselle
We shall mourn Koshka greatly 💔

@whalekeeper

“Even for kings he comes”

@esther-c

Hmm… I feel like that’s a hard one… but when I think about it, I guess people motivate me, if that makes sense.

Definitely an enneagram type 9 character.

@loopylin

School. I try to do good, but I just can’t focus. If my mind decides to think about the cute dog I saw this morning instead of boring math, who am I to tell it no?

I smell u…[Read more]

@loopylin

Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”

@ellette-giselle

Death comes for us all

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

I finished another character yesterday! He was a lot of fun…

Any thoughts/guesses on what this fellow is like?

@koshka

You alive?

@theducktator

Okay okay, she’s very important, I just couldn’t think of anyone more important to interview. XD

@loopylin

LIE. Literally just lie, Barnes already did.

?!? Who?

Seb, I’m interviewing her post-midpoint in the story I guess. The story spans a couple years.

Lucille, I thought you were single

She’s private. It’s complicated. I shall…[Read more]

I’ll do it myself. And I can’t think of anyone important to do, so I’ll just go with Barnes

1. What is your full name?

“Lucille Pallas Barnes.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

“Do not stand in front of me when I am walking. It will be dangerous for you, because I’m not easy to stop.”

3. What is…[Read more]

Yay, people want to do this 🙂

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.

I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today

1. What is your full name?

“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should…

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