@koshka
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Your style is so smooth and descriptive. 😊
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore
Here’s the enxt board! What do you think of this fellow?

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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Yay! It worked. I realize now that the last bit was a touch scrambled. It should read like this:
The little boy Laiba was carrying struggled to get down. The moment his feet touched the tent floor he trundled off to join his siblings. Laiba smiled faintly.
“They are precious.” Alyona whispered politely, her heart twisting inside her. The girl…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
And a bit from Book 2!
“Welcome, husband.” The woman by the fire stood up. She was beautiful in her own way. Her eyes were a honey gold and glowed with a quiet excitement. The hair that she brushed back under her hood was dark as night. Alyona thought she might be a few years younger than Clehan. A small child was perched on her hip, his head res…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I am too suspicious about this connection to try to open another thread to do this… I think this is the right spot though.
@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @loopylin @anyone-who-wants
I have picked up writing in my WIP a bit more the past week, although it’s a bit out of chronological order. I just…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I made it! I’ve been trying to get on all day. Had it “opening” during work which was slow today.
But I have made it. *gasp for breath*
Koshka and I are working on homework, so we’ll be on and off… As much as Wyoh lets us in.
*glares at Wyoh*
Be nice! I wrote some scenes I want to share for critiques.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
It’s barely working on my end. @godlyfantasy12 I’m sorry for responding an hour late because that’s how long it took to get in.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I love her.
Thanks XD I felt like we needed at least one secretly kind adult on this rp.
I hope the problems straighten out soon. I saw Reagan Ramm visited last week.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
My internet connection with this website is abhorrent. It took ten minutes to just load into the main page. Wyoh, if thou watchest over me, go haunt someone else.
Barnes
“Hey, Miss Teacher?” One of the smallest girls asked. “Why did we leave the classroom?”
Barnes, meanwhile, was setting up her file cabinet under a…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
No problem!
As far as I can remember, the story went like this:
It was after the train crash. Susan had heard the news and was devastated. The loss of her entire family brought a new light into her narrowed vision. I think she was sitting in front of a mirror in her room. You read mentions of the path of her…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yay. Looks like everything went though that time.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@linus-smallprint
Yes. For some reason KP is glitching, so I actually can’t see what I’m typing. I’m just shooting blind and hoping I spell and type everything. It’s like typing while blind. This is kind of odd/cool/frustrating.
I was going to say, I didn’t know that proton did that with docs. -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@linus-smallprint
WOW! I didn’t know p -
Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
The thing looks like it wants to spray acidic vomit at me. Either that or bite me and make me turn radioactive. So it dyin’, no matter what.
@theducktator you heard me right
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
YAY!! Rax and Ben get to do something finally! Barnes is interesting though…
@whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka
Rax and Ben
The teacher gave both Rax and Ben a startle, and Rax at first was a bit rebellious. Being under a tyrant all his life he wanted to not be under anyone right now. Ben knew exactly what Rax was thinking, “If you don’t lower…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Mateo
Mateo saw that his friend had sat down, and he sat in a place where many people were unfamiliar to him. So, Mateo did what he seemed to be the normal thing to do and that is to stand behind him, like a dog loyal to his master.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Barnes
When Barnes entered her classroom, none of the students noticed.
The desk layout was in shambles. Some kids had taken marker to board, and drawn creatures only dreamed of by psychotic three -year-olds. Levitated elements and paper airplanes drifted across the room.
“I see you’ve all been busy,” Barnes said. This is going to be a long…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Marcel
“You’re welcome, Celarent.” Marcel winked, although his mouth stayed in a determined line. He pulled his hand back and continued onward.
They made it to class without any more fighting. The room was already full, and a little chaotic, so Marcel had to take a seat by nobody he knew.
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