Koshka

@keilah-h

Sounds good.

@hybridlore

Eh…. it was a wild week. One I’m glad to have over. 😅

Thanks, glad you like them! Yes, Amber did do a good job with him, but she’s a peacemaker type.

You think I’m gonna kill someone! *is offended* XD

@whalekeeper

*Pops out of nowhere in a whirl of glitter*

Aha! Brilliant question!

*stops to think* *realizes being still means giving into exhaustion* *wiggles*

Off the top of my head:

I think a big thing is to make them relatable, even if they’re gone. When people die, others will usually either forget their quirks or only remember the crazy…[Read more]

Hey guys, I’ve been thinking. How do you encourage a reader to like a character who is already dead? And with minimal flashbacks? And and without being boringly sad? I have a few ideas, but this has been a challenge so far and I was wondering what everyone else thinks.

@theshadow

I’ll try to get to it!

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Sorry I’m a bit late today! I had a lot going on.

@keilah-h

Something you might also want to take in consideration is whether he is relaxed or has adrenaline pumping. If he is relaxed when he gets shot, he will bleed out faster. If he is high on adrenaline his contracted muscles will hamper the blood flow giving him more time.

@hybridlore

Haha, Evan is great.

I find it odd that the others blend. I would get that with Jason and Brian because they aren’t around as much, but I’m surprised Ron and Michael do.

Interesting.

@keilah-h

lol you know me well don’t ya?

i hope so. XD. i try to pay to attention to people’s charries…even when I forget the world lore…

I’m assuming you saw that image in the school roleplay lol.

Yep. Poor Sniper.

Also, thinking of Sniper getting shot, it hit me yesterday but Medic is definitely a parody of how real army medics will do<…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay. My limit is 4 hours of constant activity before I get tired. Then I need naps and food to get me back to normal again. If I’m not doing too much, I can make it through the day fine, but my stamina is terrible…again.

Otherwise, all’s good.

thx.

Alright, here is my feedback!

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

You know Tyn and Cyrus were my favorites from the previous book. In this book, I enjoyed James and Eric (post-memory wipe), both for their enthusiasm. Iskyagus was fun as well for the brief moment he was there.

~ Were there any c…

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@hybridlore

Now that you’ve seen a good bit of them, what do you think of the guys (and girl) on Jonathan’s team?

@hybridlore

I know.

But he is kind of being blind and self pitying. He does need to see that he’s not the only one who’s been hurt.

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UPDATE

Had my blood drawn for the blood tests yesterday. All went well except they couldn’t do one because I’m under 18, which makes no sense. It was only a heavy metals panel (which I wanted done cuz I have had problems with heavy metals before, and are prone to them) but I don’t understand why there was an age limit to it, and there was no…[Read more]

@keilah-h

How do you know all that shooting stuff, first of all?

I researched GSW’s a year or two ago for a character. He had been shot in the knee, shattering his patella and making it hard for him to walk without a brace by my lore. I wanted to see if that was really a thing (turns out, a form of torture is actually shooting someone behind the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes, and yet they handle it so differently.

Anywho, I came to make a kitten update and instead started talking about morbid stuff…

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Do you have any pictures of them?

not yet. I’ve wanted to take pictures of them sleeping (cuz they sleep in the most adorable and weird positions) but they’re in our barn…[Read more]

also, there actually is no need to google “How to hide a body” since all you need to do is look up the stories of serial killers. It’s actually pretty easy to get dangerous info by looking stuff up in less direct ways.

@keilah-h

WARNING! Some morbid content

For “where on a person will a bodyshot kill most easily” Often a little research into anatomy of the main blood vessels and into cases of GSW’s helps give you an idea without being put on any lists XD.

also, for two body shots, you’d have to know where exactly those body shots are. Do they puncture maj…[Read more]

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