Koshka

@hybridlore

You can’t just steal all of them. Otherwise I won’t post anything else. Pic who you want and let the others go.

@hybridlore

On second thought, maybe I’ll leave Joseph alone and do bad things to Asher, Eric, Noah, Darrien, and OH! And SABINA!!!!!

@hybridlore

That might be why I haven’t posted anything recently……..

@linus-smallprint

Ugh. It deleted my reply.

I liked this chapter a lot, though I have read most of it. lol.

I feel like you kinda brushed over the shame thing with Eric, and I’m hoping that’s because he’s too freaked out to think though what happened. I hope to see some more repercussion of that later on.

I like how Alan and Tyn dealt with…[Read more]

@hybridlore

What does this mean exactly?? 🤨

Wouldn’t you like to know.

@keilah-h

That would have been the strangest acronym for a missionary story ever lol

I know, right!

all I’m saying is, if you’re gonna kill Joseph, make it completely different from Aaron’s and Adrian’s deaths. Have the Empire chuck him off a cliff or something, I don’t…

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@hybridlore

What does this mean exactly?? 🤨

Wouldn’t you like to know.

@keilah-h

That would have been the strangest acronym for a missionary story ever lol

I know, right!

all I’m saying is, if you’re gonna kill Joseph, make it completely different from Aaron’s and Adrian’s deaths. Have the Empire chuck him off a cliff or something, I don’t…

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@whalekeeper

I know!!! It’s so sad!

I was freaking out when I wasn’t able to get on and the home page was dying.

@keilah-h

My dad contacted them through their Facebook page before I was able to get on. He should try that.

@liberty

Exactly.

Again, i was limited to one word, but that almost makes this topic broader.

@linus-smallprint

Duck tape? That must have been somewhat painful.

My kids have no idea what’s coming to them. lololololol.

When I reread your story, I weeded through the form and threw it into a word document so I would have access to it offline and could read it when I was taking the train to school or on a break at work. I still had the…

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@theducktator

Dad: “Online church isn’t real church!”

Me: “It’s like vegan sausage.”

AMEN TO THAT!!!

Why wouldn’t I bring a sword to a wedding?” -me

I dunno. I would.

@hybridlore

lol.

@hybridlore

Hey I have NO IDEA what happened with that. I feel like he kinda flipped.
idk. I’ll not go into it again on here.

I guessed it was sarcasm, I was just making sure. lol. Emojis tend to help. lol.

@hybridlore

 

LOL. Okay, I’m sorry for interrupting your story. I’ll just sit here quietly and wait for the next segment. 😂

Oh no problem! Sorry if I came across like you were interrupting me. I really do value feedback, even if I have a bad tendency of defending my darling books. lol.

@hybridlore

I mean like having a page in there that says, “Part 2” Like in the unabridged Little Women.

Maybe someone else from the church could go with him? Maybe because Joseph is so young, Darrien and Noah decide he needs a partner?

Someone’s jumping the gun.

How about you just hold your horses and wait and see. lololololol.

(It may be…[Read more]

@grcr

Well, it’s a lot to listen to. You;’ll have to tell me what you think after you’ve heard all the ones you haven’t listened to before.

@grcr

No Noah?

Well That’s almost all of them. Right?

@grcr

How many did you find on YouTube? I know they planned to upload all of them.

@hybridlore

Yes, it is a time jump!!!! If it’s too jolting, I may split the sections into parts. I’ll see what Linus says.

Uh, no, he’s not. Aaron was a missionary. Joseph is looking to become an elder. It’s two different things. He wants to be Aaron, but he can’t. That’s not what he’s been called to do.

And I’m not really sure how much more…[Read more]

@grcr

Yeah! I’ve found them all between the Sight and Sound YouTube channel and Pandora (Spotifi has them too) I can send some album links if you want.

haha, I bet they are.

Okay then! I’ll make sure to tag you, though you’ll want to read the chapters I’ve posted or else this’ll make no sense. lol.

@grcr

Have you listened to the soundtracks? They have them online and I’vfe listened to all of them. Daniel is going to be AMAZING!!

Haha! So all you’re doing is reading the critiques? lol. That’s funny! I hope they’re interesting. haha,

Do you want me to tag you when I post chapters?