Koshka

@ellette-giselle

Is a POV blind spot bad?

Nah, not really. Depends on how you handle it. Females are 50% of the population and many of them must be firstborns. We know very little about them. It’s a world building thing, and you’ve had to choose where to spend your effort, so it’s not surprising you haven’t included them.

If you wanted to, all…[Read more]

nope. Still no pictures.

@grcr

GOODNESS!

@hybridlore   @keilah-h

That is true, and I have mentioned females a few times, but 618 in not really in contact with them. It will come out a little more now that he works with the Agents, though they are mostly military focused.

@whalekeeper

Is a POV blind spot bad?

But anyhow, I’m glad everyone likes to see the soldier side of t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*cries in corner with you*

@theshadow

Yeah, it’s pretty cool!

And if you don’t enjoy rock, that’s fine. Sometimes certain genres bothers a person and they don’t know why. It’s just a fact of their life. Many country songs rub me off the wrong way, and I don’t know why. 🤷‍♀️

You might have to explain what that thing is though XD.

Synesthesia? That’s where a person has de…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Cries in a corner*

I do like how in this book, we’re getting to see the perspective of one of the soldiers.

True.

It is also true, I forgot. We only have one female character so far. Other than what I call “extras.” And she isn’t from the city, so we have a POV blind spot, so to speak.

@hybridlore

Perfect.

Oh, you think he’s gonna do that? Hmmm.

@hybridlore

Thanks! Have you read all three? Or just the two ones from this morning?

@koshka     @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon    @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper     @power    @hybridlore     @liberty

ONE MORE NEW CHAPTER

@whalekeeper

Just tried this morning. No go.

@koshka     @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon    @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper     @power    @hybridlore     @liberty

TWO NEW CHAPTERS. HOPEFULLY MORE LATER

@linus-smallprint

I think @whalekeeper mentioned something that is pretty valid and I agree with, so I’ll let you answer her before I pose more thoughts.

As for the church leaving… they did. They left the city, but there is no place to run to, and while they did go underground, there is still the fact that 1. the will be discovered, it’s…[Read more]

If you don’t think it’s a comparable scenario, I’d be curious to know why.

@linus-smallprint

I’m not going to dig myself too far into this convo. But the way I see it, the government is torturing the inhabitants of the city. They’re literally killing kids. So… I don’t know what to say, other than to pose the same situation in front of you and ask you what you would do. There’s no peaceful way to deal with this, and…[Read more]

@theducktator

Lol. Thanks for mentioning it though.

@linus-smallprint

Haha, no problem. Things have been wild down here too.

Ah yes, long drives are very helpful. Especially three-day long drives like we just took. Literally started going through and just reading ever KP forum ever.

Anyhow. Rabbit trail.

Aha, thought it would be that verse. Well, here’s my stance. What their government…[Read more]