Koshka

@theducktator

Marcel

Marcel gave Celarent a wry smile. “You want to go ask her?”

@keilah-h

I’m afraid they aren’t much like Bad Batch. XD But I wondered if you would suggest that.

@loopylin @theducktator

Barnes

As Barnes strode through the garden’s undergrowth and the deep mists, hopefully close enough behind Mel to notice any commotion, the flashlight bobbed along like a will-o’-the-wisp, guiding her. If only there was a dry place to stay, some place to keep consistent light. Barnes did not mind the maze – something abo…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I’ve only watched it once, it was good lol.

Fortunately they don’t always actually die, y’know? Gives you a good scare though.

That’s the key to surviving an ill-fated Google search. You have to remember Google might be wrong.

@keilah-h

Pascal clutching his heart is so funny. XD

*Gasp* How dare you not know who Milo is!! He’s from Atlantis: The Lost Empire.

anyone else have that happen to you, where you write a scene, think it was your idea, only to realize it was mostly an accidental reiteration of a scene from your favorite movie or book?

I’ve had fleeting ideas tha…[Read more]

@keilah-h

In an older project, Farr Jule took in his daughter’s friends despite the risk and their troublesome natures. Jule had six brothers, and they all watched over the child protagonists as a large family unit. The family was widespread over a floating town, but was very disciplined. I liked writing Jule because he was always gracious and u…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Haha. I wish.

Oh, so you want a body, do you? I can go dig it up. Maybe. Government probably burned it through.

@hybridlore

Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*

Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….

Yes!! I love that chapter!!!

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

20-21!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

😂 Yay!

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those,

Great! I will look forward to those. I actually went over the doc and changed some of those t…[Read more]

@liberty

Ok, critiques/comments to come later, but I was able to sit down and read through it for now. I love it! I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those, but…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

😆 I’m excited to hear what you say!

Don’t worry…I sometimes miss things too.

@liberty

Oh, I just saw this and decided to investigate. XD (Now I really wish I checked my notifications more often. Lol) Sorry it took me so long. And I won’t be able to read through it until later today or tomorrow. 😢 Still, so excited!

Liberty’s Rangers story!!

@loopylin

XD Me too.

I like science well enough. I really liked Geology and Radiology. (Lots of elements causing drama together.) Hence my choice of lecture. XD

I can think up ideas for the expirement… Identifying minerals by the color of their rubbings, whether they glow in the dark, how they break, how hard they are, and if they fiz when a…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh. Duh.

I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.

@hybridlore

What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!

*stares at you with total deadpan face*

Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?

Thanks so much!

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

18-19

@theducktator

No worries! Thanks for getting back to me, though.

Great! From the three POVs, how would you describe those three fellows? Zahn, Kyler, and Guy.