Koshka

@ellette-giselle

I went through all six chapters! I’m thoroughly enjoying the story! I’m excited to see Cassion appear.

By the way, how much research did you do for all the jet tech stuff? Did you actually look into all those terms they talked about?  Especially Jason’s engineering talk…

@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty

TWO MORE NEW CHAPTERS. FOUR IN TOTAL TODAY.

And goodnight.

@theducktator
I’m glad you’re happy with Evan’s board. How is Evan the duck btw?

Sounds good! I’ll be looking forward to sunday comments!

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power     @hybridlore   @liberty

TWO NEW CHAPTERS. Possibly more later.

Oh cheese and crackers, now I’m worried everyone’s gonna think I’m a horrible person

I just released that band might cause you pain to look up because the Google search makes them look satanic. 😅😭 They do not worship a demon, point blank, and I can explain that if need be.

@theshadow

Hey! 🙂 I haven’t thought about this in a long time, but I agree with everyone else on this thread. Just because a genre of music has been used to spread bad messages does not mean the genre itself is bad.

Take jazz, for example. There are many different jazz songs, and these songs have been the backdrop for cozy, peaceful memories…[Read more]

@theshadow

I’m not an expert on this, but would say that as long as the song itself does not glorify sin, it probably falls in with eating meat sacrificed to idols. Paul teaches that one person may be able to eat it with the understanding that God made all things and the food is just food and can be eaten to glorify God instead, but another…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thank you very much!

That was really helpful about the description thing. I think that makes more sense. I wonder too if I over-did the “buzz” words in dystopian literature because I was trying to cut down on description. XD I’ll totally look at that.

Hmmm, that’s interesting what you are saying aboyt the Christianity thing.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Some of the characters had very compelling characteristics, like Jim’s human decency and Evan with his likable dialogue. They all served their roles and were decently memorable. Jonathan was my favorite because he was the POV…[Read more]

@liberty

This one’s fascinating. I like him, even though he’s probably not a great guy… yup. You said he’s a villain. Oh well. XD Let’s see…

The board is both straight forward and mysterious, so I’m guessing the character is pretty similar. The child aspects are most interesting to me, since I can’t tell if they represent him or someone he…[Read more]

@keilah-h

He’s one of the villains.

-he has a pet crow or raven

Actually, I wasn’t thinking of it like that…but that makes a lot of sense. Okay, I’ll add this to the story!

Yes! You are correct!

@hybridlore

Wow, it looks great! But this seems like a sad character or a villain. 😢

Yup. But thankfully…something good happens.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m trying to fill out these feedback questions before I lose track of what’s happening. *Types furiously*

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

I say remove the part about tragedy striking, and only…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Wow!! That was fast!

Okay awesome! I’d love to see your answers to the questions!

Hmm, I guessed you might be the one to bring that up. I think we both have different beliefs on this in general, but if there are some things you want to talk about, then I’m willing to listen. I think it may end up one of those impasses like…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Someone has been snooping. SHHHH!

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power     @hybridlore     @linus-smallprint    @liberty

For anyone having trouble with the link, try this.

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@theshadow

I don’t tend to listen to Rock, so I’m not the best one to answer this. XD

@ellette-giselle

Oh joy! Oh exultation!

I haven’t been able to really look at this thread in a bit. (Been up to my elbows in royal icing.) Now oh!

I’m so excited. It’s this book! Hooray!

I love Cassion and Rory’s boards. They’re perfect.

Do you have a scene with sliding around on sock feet? It would be delightfully light-hearted for a book w…[Read more]

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power     @hybridlore     @linus-smallprint    @liberty

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@ellette-giselle

YAYY!!!!