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@ellette-giselle

Nice! Did you study/read about instances where Christians first talked to unbelievers like your scene above?

@theducktator

Absolutely! I do it in class and at work too. Or at church and conferences. It can get really distracting. O.O XD

You might be an author if you randomly eavesdrop on strangers so you can get story ideas.

@linus-smallprint

also, if KP glitches and you don’t get all the notifs, I try to post at least once a day, so if you check I’ll most likely have posted something between 5:00 in the morning and noon.

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NEXT SECTION!!!

(Sorry, things are crazy right now. Otherwise I would have posted one yesterday too)

The next morning, Leon and Julian woke early. The two sat and read their Bibles for a time. Then Julian sat down beside Leon on the edge of his bed and…

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@raxforge

Haha! That’s awesome!

@ellette-giselle

but i prefer this method

As someone who does Jiujitsu, that meme made my day, lol

@theducktator

LOL

@loopylin

Hey! Another 21 pilots fan! I would say they are my favorite band

@keilah-h

what?!? google is dumb. lololololol.

That’s OLD British slang. (came about in WWI)

It means “awesome.”

Cracking Ace!

@whalekeeper

That’s alright, no worries. I get that a lot.

It;s not a bad thing! I love interesting people.

(I hope you didn’t take that wrong. when people say that to me it’s always in a not nice way. Sorry if I came across like that!)

@keilah-h

I love the word cricky, and it was the first thing that came to mind. I was going to substitute it with a more American option, but then realized you would be someone who could appreciate a good British/Australian exclamation, so I left it.

A little if both I would say.

@liberty

Ah, so it is.

I forgot they had the same name! lol.

@ellette-giselle

Great! That’s a great trope to break.

Ernst is the name of Josef’s son in CR, right?

@liberty

Yeah, it must be the fact that I’m breaking a story trope where the wild animals always attack.

Yep! This is a German/Roman hybrid. The German just hasn’t come out much until now.

And…you created another Ernst?

Sorry?

@ellette-giselle

I just read your latest section. I was struck by how German their names are!😂 And…you created another Ernst?

Haha! I’ve had others complain that the wolves DIDN’T attack! XD.

Then, I’m extremely glad I told you my input. The animals do not have to attack every single time! *shaking head* So unrealistic.

@liberty

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Julian, run!”

Leon is still trying to gather his thoughts and figure out what Julian just jumped into…. lol.

Got that about the river.

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@ellette-giselle

My thoughts on Section 2:

“We don’t believe in the gods of the Empire,” Julian cut in.

There was a stunned silence.

“We worship the One true God,” Julian explained.

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Ju…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh I thought it was funny. No worries!