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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
ugh. KP is grounded for bad behavior.
🤣Question out of curiosity: How do you decide if the journal entries you share should be from either Leon or Julian? Some authors may try to give an even number for both characters, but you seem to have some sort of method for choosing them.
huh. I haven’t really thought about it. Well, I g…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
oh yes Leon.
huh. I mention that a lot of what the people are eating is vegetation and wolves don’t eat that.
odd that it was confusing… 🫤is there a better way to word it you think?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
yes. That is appropriate sound effects there. 😂
Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.
woah!! What makes you say that? 😅
lololol. I wrote this before reading those. Yes, perfect archer name.
as for Leon… we shall have to see.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.
That is an awesome idea! And it sounds just like something…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’m game 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
Aw, I love it! The colors are so cheerful and the lines are so clean… ♥️
Taking pictures of art is rough. It still looks great though!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Also, I signed up for Crazy Editing Week. It’s right after my school term ends, so I’m hoping to get some stuff done. XD
Is anyone else planning on doing it?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Yes!
I’m working over the summer, but it’s maintenance on a campground, so I expect to have an easier schedule than I now.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
That’s vicious. And brilliant.
… I have. O_O It was okay. XD Not worth risking Natalian citizenship.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Dun dun duuuunnnn.
Nice! I really liked those last few chapters!
Notes…
Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.
Night was falling fast and there was no shelter. They were hemmed in by high cliffs on either side, and the wind shrieked down the path.
This section made me think of Carahadras. Brrrrrrr.
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Hmm. They seemed to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
It’s digital art, which is definitely beyond me at best, so you get a gold star for that. ⭐!!
And now I can imagine him a bit better! You did a really good job capturing his character. I like it. 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year ago
Eh, he’s just 17. You can call him boy for another few years without it being weird. XD
Deductions…
He’s gentle and tender hearted. He has a strong faith in God and tries to share it with his friends, if he has any.
He loves nature and animal, especially birds. He likes to draw the world around him, and maybe has a special notebook…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year ago
Ok, that’s just beautiful! The pictures and messages are most of them sad/dark, but it’s so aesthetic that I keep coming back to look at it. You did such a good job bringing the different pictures together.
Love them both! The character claims do fit them very well.
Their stories are just… Sniff. I really want more Leon…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 13thÂ
The EmpireWe are all settled down inside a cave complex the Lord led us to. It has begun to really snow in earnest outside, but we have wood for a fir…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
*shuts mouth and stews silently.*
🤣
No, it’s really good. You did a great job. 🥰
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Ruth posted an update 1 year ago
Funny, isn’t it, how when humans find something beautiful, their eyes quickly find the single blemish. Instead of enjoying the beauty, they focus on that one blemish, and suddenly that thing is no longer so beautiful anymore to them.
Is it right to look only at the blemish? No, I don’t think so. Is it right to look only at the beauty? No, I…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.
Chase
Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
Though I do know soldiers had to be clean shaven at that time…….. 🤭
Shhhh let me have my creative liberty😂🫶
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
That’s awesome! I can sympathize.
Some other question ideas:
Will Snoden and/or Hewson be in this next book?
When did he start writing stories?
What’s one writing habit to avoid?
Does he think his connection to the Zulu tribes inspire anything in Green Ember? If so, what?
Who was Wilfred’s first wife/family he lost?
Will there…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
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