Koshka

@godlyfantasy12

Wow! I never realized that either. Are you planning to self publish? (I’m not sure yet)

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Eira

Stories swirled the air, stirring up memories I’d long locked away. I stared down at the hands folded in my lap, tracing the feel of each bony knuckle. The fingers were long and talon like but much too white for a bird. I closed them tight.

Those things…I’d seen them happen. Sometimes…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Eira

The story, I’d heard the like all her life. One child came in with a broken heart and left with a pain killer. What I hadn’t expected was the end. So I sit in mute silence as the impact of what was said flows over me.

The door flies open, shattering the peace of the room like glass. I…[Read more]

@wilder-w

Almarrin

Her…father? Rhaich! Teeth came together and grey eyes flashed, but he finished the sling with an even gentler hand.

Then he found a Janitor’s closet nearby and cleaned up the tile. The lass on the other hand–she was still huddled against the wall, eyes round in her white face, shivering. He frowned and pulled his jacket…[Read more]

@wilder-w

Almarrin

A scream, distant yet clear, broke through their conversation. A young female, calling someone’s name in a voice that sent prickles up his neck. It was cut short. Almarrin glanced at Inglor’s startled face, then ran, footsteps echoing down the hall.

Which way? There were dozens of halls, and hundreds if not thousands of…[Read more]

@wilder-w

Hope!!!! *Weeps*

Okay, I have a character that can help! Almarrin’s sort of spying around campus right now, so he’s more than available.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Squishy!!!!!!!

Eira

To my utter relief the prayer was short, but still the words rankled my mind. She called Him the God who sees. As if this God so many people believed in cared a jot about us. As if he even listened.

Maybe He is real, I don’t know, but if he is, he obviously doesn’t think…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YES. The worst thing we could do would be to forget. I agree that it does need written about, and I am certainly still waiting for more. Just…*sigh*

Mwahaha… character conflict.

Ooo! I can’t wait!

@freedomwriter76

…and now we enter the reason I don’t typically study WWII.

*gasp*

I’m an eccentric mentor!?

*Starts to throw confetti*

Waaiiittttt….

*Lowers confetti*

What exactly does that mean?

@godlyfantasy12

And you do a lovely job of it too! XD

@freedomwriter76

Ugh! I. Despise. Hans.

That was so good! I love all the history stuff, even though, to be honest, I usually don’t research WWII often. I do love this though, and….ahhhh….

This is totally making me want to dig Promise of Zion out again. XD

@godlyfantasy12

AHHHHHH!!!! Just don’t look to closely, alright?

Hmm, I guess you could dictate out loud.

@freedomwriter76

Yeah but – *shhhh!* Don’t tell her the rest!

@godlyfantasy12

She has auburn/red hair (a little more red than auburn though), and leaf green with amber and blue flecks.

Do I obsess over my character’s eyes? Maybe a little. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Hehehe….*whispers*

“She’s figured us out!”

Yes, we definitely know each other in real life.

@godlyfantasy12

XD XD XD

Aplets and Cotlets! Little candies similar to Turkish Delights, but made from apples, pears, or apricots, and assorted tree nuts. Or no nuts, it depends on the variety.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

*Waves*Hi!! Want some?

*Holds out a box of Aplets and Cotlets*

@felicity

I am wondering though, Ludwika and Michał, are they just being obnoxious brother and sister, or is there conflict in this family? Because it may just be me, but they felt rather strained.

And what draft is this?

@felicity

Wow. I like your set up. You did a very good job of an intro.

I did feel like some things were a little too stated, and perhaps not quite smooth. You did a very good job though. I enjoyed it, and will be hoping for more!

And I should probably read more contemporary fiction. It was a little bit funny on my side to be reading about cell…[Read more]