Koshka

@freedomwriter76

That scene. Was. So. Good. Some Peet’s of it could have been far too graphic, but not with that beautiful twist. Ugh. That’s the type of books we need more of.

( You can completely ignore this paragraph, but I’m adding it in because I wish someone pointed it out to me when I first started writing. So, just to save you a bunch of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That makes total sense, although perhaps an interesting system of genetics.

Wait…what incident?

WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!?

Of course, I understand that you didn’t necessarily do anything, but you are the author, so…

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

I’m thinking the twins have somewhat heightened senses, as I’m trying to make them more like in the books. However, they probably don’t even notice it.

The Twins

Zlatan rubbed a hand down the back of his neck till he could feel the bindings. Still in place and relatively tight. Good.

Then he…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Btw, if any of y’all have read LotR, Annia happens to have the same personality as Pippin, although thankfully not the same percentages.

Cécile

She smiled and gave a small nod. “If you would like. We don’t know our way around here, but do you need help looking for your friends?”

The group s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

*Drops through window*

Did I hear my name?

Ooo, looks like I left some characters hanging.

*Ruefully pats Annia on the head*

@theloonyone

Well, they’re not exactly bands. Come ti think of it, I’m not sure what they’re called. They were randomly picked from a long list. =)

• Indiana Bible College is a church/Bible College choir. They have some spectacular music. I also enjoy several other Bible Colleges, but that’s the one I thought of first.
• Sight and Sound is a…

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@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Nyx looked miffed, like a kid told no.

At least everyone here seemed to have a sense of humor, even if slightly disfunctional. He grinned and seated himself cross legged and leaned against the wall, hands clasped behind his head.

Zlatan

He eased himself to the floor, grateful for…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Grimm!!!! *Sob*

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon

Zlatan

“We’re stopping, and you are going to rest,” Grimm stared at him. “But if you have a problem with that, you’re free to go your own way.”

Vulkasin laughed. And kept laughing till he sank helplessly to the floor. Great. Zlatan cut his eyes at his brother, but he couldn’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

At last. Someone to make Zlati slow down for a moment.

But his brother had that quirk in his brow which said he was thinking. Analyzing.

“I’m a Desanik. I’ll be fine.” He gave the edge of his cloak a jerk. “But if you vant to stop a moment…V’e do need to know v’hat happened to…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Welcome to the Kingdom! I’m Koshka, a writer of non-magical medieval-fantasy and other stuff. Mostly poetry.

Oooo, I have no idea what all those music people/bands are, but then I have a rather… unique taste? My favorites include but is definitely not limited to, Indiana Bible College, Sight and Sound theater, and Simon…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

*Slips in through secret hatch*

You’re fine! I figured out what happened right away, and don’t worry. I’ve done plenty of mildly embarrassing stuff on here, such as tagging myself. Twice.

*Vanishes*

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

He carefully set aside the strangeness of what had just happened. They needed to move, to find whoever was responsible for turning Nyx into a mad creature.

But to do that, they’d need speed. Zatan sucked in a breath and leaned against the wall for a moment. Mentally, he gathered up all…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

This is a little difficult to write, as the twins actually are wolves.

The Twins

Zlatan stood frozen to the wall, his eyes thinning to liquid gold slits.

Vulkasin clamped his mouth shut. How long had he been staring with it hanging like that? Ever since Grimm had done…well, whatever that wa…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Wow. I never really noticed that. I mean, I sort of saw the similarities but I’ve also barely written her, so all I have is her voice, if that makes sense.

Okay. Zlatan will probably be totally weirded out, while Vulkasin’s gonna be like “THIS IS SO COOL!”

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Annia

Now that there was no more…no more…blood, she could come bounding over with as much energy as usual.

The fairy had been crying, her nose and cheeks all pink and rosey.

Oh, wait. She hadn’t introduced herself yet. She waved to the others.

“My name’s Annia Winston. Good to meet…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty then! Yeah no, they weren’t.

@elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Cécile

The poor fellow had been whipped again, and again. Angry red welts and abrasions crisscrossed in haphazard fashion. And this hasn’t been the first time, telling from the old scars these new ones covered.

She let out a few Algermain expressions l…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

So um, how have Dawson’s wip wounds been treated? Cause that might influence her response.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Y’all…XD I think I like Joshua

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Annia

She slowly tore her eyes away from the fairy and settled them on the two newcomers everyone else had been looking for.

Tall, in kinda funny clothing. One over five and a half feet, the other closer to six and a half. She smiled and cocked her head, lightly bouncing on her toes.

The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Dawson, no!!

And he had better be careful, or he’ll get a military nurse called down on him.

Btw, Cécile was a fully trained nurse, on her way to becoming a midwife actually, when the war flared up again, and she got called into the reserves.