Koshka

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Zlatan’s left shoulder ached. He sighed and shifted the weight of his shield. I don’t know what to do.

He could hear his brother’s even steps behind him, and then a moment later at his side. He glanced up at his twin. Vulkasin’s yellow-green eyes were flashing bright with excitement. How can he like this sort of th…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yay! Its Nyx and Lyn! I was hoping. =)

@godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin and Zlatan

Ara was hiding a smile. Vulkasin supposed Zlatan could have chosen a better name, but then, there were worse.

“I’m afraid not…Though, I’m guessing from the way you describe him, you aren’t on good terms?” She glanced at Novembré who seemed a bit red about the ears. Vulkasin grinned, then wiped it off under hi…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Go ahead! You could have her interact with Sofia, if you wanted.

@emilysf

Hmmm, if you could write this well it could be powerful, but…hmm. My brain may have exploded over this one. Here are a few questions:

Is your MC dying just because he won’t defend himself/kill someone, or because he sees that Anti isn’t ready to die/has something he needs to do. Obviously someone willing to murder isn’t ready to die,…[Read more]

Worldbuilding is fun, difficult and frustrating sometimes yes, but we didn’t actually think this would be easy, did we?

*Sigh of dismay*

I do enjoy it though, especially being able to create my own solar/calender system, because why be boring? Hint; if you’re wanting to show a huge rift between two cultures using separate calenders helps. In…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Vulkasin wasn’t alone. Zlatan’s golden eyes narrowed as he studied the girl a moment. Brown hair and eyes, worried face. She stared at him as if he would eat her.

Novembré stepped out behind him. “So, you’ll help me then?”

The girls face flashed with light at her sudden smile. “November!”

The lad’s face…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

And November and Ara are awesome! I keep laughing with every new VP of his.

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! I will admit I may have used my two best MCs, but their also my favorite, so…and Vulkasin really does need development.

Vulkasin

The girl had come to a halt a few feet away. She looked as frightened and out of place as the lad inside the armory.

“H-hello. I…” Her voice trailed off.

Then she took a deep breath and looked Vulkasin straight in the eye, a feat for anyone considering his height.

“My name’s Arabella Fabel.” She dipped her head politely. “I’m…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I like long ones!  =)

Zlatan

In an instant November had changed from a fumbling bundle of nerves to a lad staring at Zlatan with a look ready to tear down walls. “Have you seen Arabella? She’s my…She’s my friend.”

Zlatan’s smile returned. The lad could be a fighter after all. “Neh, I ‘ave not seen any living soul ‘ere beside y…[Read more]

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Zlatan

The lad was obviously in an emotional breakdown. He was pulling his hair and jabbering.

“Point is, I..ah, really didn’t mean to do any of this! It just kinda…happens.” the lad grimaced. “So…if you could…not mention this? Or…umm…not lock me away for all eternity?” He smiled but his eyes were still terrified.

Zlata…[Read more]

Zlatan and Vulkasin

The brothers strode down the hall, swords drawn, shields ready. Whoever had dragged them who knew how far to lock them up in a closet, not even the dignity a real cell, had much explaining to do.

Vulkasin gripped the handle and pulled. This door swung open with the ease of a well mannered fox. Zlatan held his shield up…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That’s fine with me! Also, it may be good to keep them human here, as some things about wolf nature really only work in the right story…such as sudden madness at the taste or smell of blood. *Shrug* So what if I may be ignoring thumbs in my books?

Oh, I forgot to mention, the twins have an accent, but by the end of this thing I mostly gave up. It’s a pain to write in first draft. XD

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Vulkasin slammed himself against the door, again. This time he was rewarded with a bruised face.

“Getting anyvere?” Zlatan’s voice cut through the fog inside Vulkasin’s head.

“Neh. You…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

If you wish. They’re about to meet November. 😉

Ooooooooo! This is awesome!

So, hi! I am Koshka (or at least that’s who I am around here, bwahaha) and here are my characters; 17 year old twins Zlatan Vulkasin, who though wolves in my book will, for convenience, be human here. That are wearing swords, a shield strapped across the back, and an open-faced Rus style helmet. Zlatan will also be…[Read more]

@faith-q

Well, I really haven’t been paying enough attention have I? I just saw this tag. =|

That sounds like a good start for a story, and is making ideas spring into my head. If written well it wouldn’t be cliche. It has some possibilities for a powerful storyline.

Random spark of ideas- What if this country is something like Israel under…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah, murdering characters is definitely one of those harder things about story plotting. I have a MIA in one of mine who won’t come back, even though part of me is testing that point pretty hard.

Oh… huge Wingfeather spoiler  was so well written, but, ahh, it hurt. *Sniff*