Koshka

@godlyfantasy12

Oh! I just reread your question. Perhaps they should meet up here, but they could also find the door left open/slashed and think “That’s funny. We should be on guard.”

@godlyfantasy12

I’m not sure how sci-fi will work with my 10th century charies. If they do meet I think it should be after the kitchens.

But I’ll roll with whatever.

@madelyn

Uh, I’m not entirely sure, but I’ll give you an outline of what I’ve done.

I’m supposing you already have your character/s discovered for the most part, so-

I read To Save a Cat Writes a Novel.

And warped that advice to fit my own needs.

But what exactly did I do?

Well…

WARNING: THIS MAY BE UNINTELLIGIBLE AND HORRIBLE ADVICE.…[Read more]

@emilysf @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

I shall keep it then! =)

Ooooooooo…I like that scene.

You asked for a long one?

Zlatan

“Down means we’re closer to the exit, right?” There was a faint desperate gleam in Novembré’s eyes.

A very different gleam shone in his brother’s. “Ah, let’s hope so. Of course, it could mean Ve-”

“It should.”…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sorry, I’m trying to write around work so, I will be a minute. You don’t have to wait on me!

@emilysf @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan and Vulkasin

They started off down the hall, Zlatan feeling as if he was back in his second year training with twenty-four first year students all unintentionally pushing their Student Officer, Zlatan, near insanity.

I always used to wonder why Commanders were grey headed.

He had survived that,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, poor November. (Marching ration may or may not be based of MREs)

AWESOME!

*Hands you a balloon which explodes sending more confetti everywhere*

@godlyfantasy12

Zlatan and Vulkasin

“Like valking.” Zlatan’s eyebrow rose, “Ever heard of it?”He swiveled to the others before his brother could respond.

He decided to treat this as a counsel among officers, not a muster of troops.

Start with the object.

“So, ve need to pick von of zees passages and try to find a vay down.”

Next state…[Read more]

Oh dear…to be honest I don’t understand some of those, but that last one is great. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Oh that’s fine! He’s always doing stuff like that whenever he isn’t serious…if he is ever serious.

@godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin and Zlatan

He couldn’t help it anymore. Oh he tried, but November just kept adding to his mirth.

He finally got himself under control again, as Zlatan was giving him the Elder Brother look.

And then November nearly burst his reserve again. “Oooh…I just thought since food was involved, ya know, butter….” He glanc…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That made me laugh so hard!!! XD

@emilysf

Ok, I did! =)

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Alrighty!

Zlatan and Vulkasin

He’d done it again, gone off singing aloud with other people around. He sighed.

“That….that was beautiful.” Ara said softly. “What was that song?”

Zlatan shifted his shield, but kept his eyes out the window. “Forgive me, it vas, ah, song of ze seasons.”

“He just made it up and doesn’t v’…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf

Is Sofia next?

@emilysf

Hello, I believe we haven’t officially met though we have technically, so, uh…

Hi! I’m called Koshka around here, and I didn’t read through this whole thread so I most likely Definitely don’t know as much about you as I could.

That sounded weird.

Anyway, I have read Lord of the Rings, and enjoyed it, but I’m not obsessed by the s…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Ara knelt and began to tear a strip from the hem of her dress. Vulkasin started at the sound, “Vat are you doing?”

Zlatan understood his brother’s confusion; no Vulkish soldier would even think to bandage scraped knuckles.

No, not a vulk. Images flashed before him, for a moment taking place of the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf

Okay, let’s see how this goes…

Oh, and which one of the brothers is Sofia’s hight? Zlatan=nearly 5’8″, Vulkasin=over 6’7″

Vulkasin and Zlatan

Lyn was the bravest person he’d seen in a long time. Well, besides his brother, but Zlatan was a different kind of brave, a person who followed through no matter the cost.

But…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Am looking you up.

Thanks.😏

That would be helpful, thank you!

@godlyfantasy12

Aww… I was really scared for him for a minute there.

*Sigh in appreciation of another good story*

Hard themes? Oh yeah, those. I don’t have any of those. (Sarcasm intended) XD

Wow. I don’t know what to say. We need more of that type of story, TRUE fiction.

(I’m actually struggling with my story stuff right now, as…I do…[Read more]