@keilah-h
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Next chapter! This scene was a little fun to write as it uses a new location that did not exist within my first draft.
The last bit of character I want Alan to develop may now be more apparent, Keliah.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @keilah-h
LONG Section!!!!!
Darrien lost his job the next morning.
The Governor decided that if the main part of the city was rebuilt, the work could stop. This left a group of neighborhoods to the east in terrible disarray, and it wasn’t long before only thieves and war refugees inhabited them.
To e…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
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freedom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @grcr @loopylin @anyone-else-idk-lolll
Steve Rogers & Ryo (an OC, from some fanfics)
(outline traced; some done by me. Coloring/details by me)

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore
“Joseph!” Asher yelled.
Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.
Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.
The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore
“Joseph!” Asher yelled.
Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.
Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.
The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Thanks y’all! This was so great to come home to!
I’m glad y’all liked Adrian’s reintroduction! It’s one of my favorite scenes.
Ah, thanks Linus for the typo catches.
There we go, there is that Ardenta mistrust appearing.
Yes. Glad you caught that! Not only is the poor kid traumatized by soldiers, (as alluded to in…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lollll-XD
Life/Writing Update, Request for Brainstorming Help, and maybe a scene snippet👀
Hiiii everyone!!! Y’all may have noticed that I’m not super active here on KP anymore😅 Truth is, life has been kinda hectic,…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@everyone @loopylin @koshka @raxforge @rae @theducktator @esther-c @keilah-h
I’ve got lots of animal charries! (that’s because my WIP has 100% animal characters). If anyone wants to start this up, I’d love to be a part of it!
If you need help creating animal characters, I’d love to help! (Animals are m…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h Here ya go! 😁
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore
NEXT SECTION
A day passed, and then another. Slowly, Joseph was beginning to come to terms with his grief. He was beginning to spend more time praying, asking God to help him. He knew he could never be like Aaron, but maybe God would at least help him triumph over the nightmares that stole his sleep…
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h @rae @theshadow @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22
Joy
So apparently there were instruments around here. Silvanis and Fairy had each found one. Joy didn’t recognize Fairy’s, but Silvanis’ appeared to be a piano. Fairy began to play, and Silvanis joined in. Joy leaned forward. Their music sounded like nothing she had ever heard…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h Sorry this took so long. I was on a trip, and then I had to catch up on school.
Ayla
“So there are, in fact, enemy soldiers about like you assumed,” said Mr. Crosshair. “Fortunately, they seem to be pretty brainless, so as long as we avoid being in their direct line of sight we should be fine.”
That sounded boring. Besides, if we av…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 1 year, 8 months ago
@keilah-h Whatever you want! Lyrical, instrumental, whatever! ✨
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey, thank you so much for this!
Yes, that’s exactly what I’m trying to do, and I’m so glad you can see that! Makes me so happy!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Yeah, well “so far” is the key term, my girl.
We’ll see.
Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I don’t think it should, but I’ve seen some people go at it like They are the ones s…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I’m also pretty…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
*cough cough*
I knew that.
*wince*
Sorry i forgot! Okay, so I have an older age range. Good.
I would definitely like some advice (maybe later on) in how to classify these books. I was thinking YA, but that could include 13 or so year olds, and the violence level in these books might be to high for that. I mean, they are kinda dark…[Read more]
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thank you!!!
I hope this interrogation satisfies you 😄
haha I hope so too.